When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind Novel Review

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4.3

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Genres

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comedy drama mature romance sports yaoi

Chapters

100 chapters

Started

2020

Description

Within the industry, everyone knew Team DG’s captain Lu Zhe and Team BLX’s top laner Shen Qiao didn’t get along. They said it was due to hormones. They said it was a basic AA incompatibility. Lu Zhe once said of Shen Qiao: “Obsessed with kills. Lone wolf.” With a cold smile, Shen Qiao said of Lu Zhe: “Command’s mediocre. Shitty jungler.” But then… When Team DG, champions of the last tournament season, stumbled during the Spring Tournament and fell during the semifinals, someone cut through the furious cursing and swearing that had consumed the internet and leaked the news— Shen Qiao was going to be traded. He was joining Team DG. When that news came out, the internet roared. Did Shen Qiao and Lu Zhe fight today? On esports forums, trolls and haters placed their bets. It was endless, until Team DG won its second world championship crown. Half a month after the tournament. The players of Team DG hosted a livestream: “The lodgings were awful. Captain and Qiaoqiao had to share a room. Aren’t we pitiful?” Shen Qiao, sitting next to the monitor, glanced over through hooded eyes. He caught a glimpse of a bullet comment and echoed it out loud: “Did we fight?” He lifted a hand to his neck. “We fought.” Lu Zhe approached with a cup of black tea. Just in time to see Shen Qiao touch the bite mark on his throat. He added: “We even broke the bed.”

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind

This novel was quite a ride! "When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind" offers a unique blend of e-sports drama, ABO dynamics, and a second-chance romance, creating an engaging experience. I went in expecting a strong, competitive dynamic, and while it delivered in some aspects, it also had a few shortcomings.

First Impressions

Initially, I was hooked by the premise of an Alpha/Alpha pairing in the competitive world of e-sports, specifically League of Legends. The concept of two dominant personalities clashing, both in and out of the game, was incredibly appealing. The early chapters drew me in with the promise of high sexual tension and the mystery surrounding the main characters' shared past.

What Works Well

The chemistry between the MC and ML is undeniable. The novel thrives on their push-and-pull dynamic, with plenty of playful teasing and underlying passion. I found the e-sports scenes to be well-written and easy to follow, even for someone like me who isn't deeply familiar with League of Legends. The author does a commendable job balancing the romance and gaming aspects, creating a cohesive narrative. The translation quality is also consistently praised, making for a smooth reading experience. The initial plot points were well placed and the story was very interesting.

Areas of Concern

While the premise of a strong Alpha/Alpha relationship is exciting, I felt like it didn't always live up to its full potential. There were instances where the dynamic felt uneven, with one character consistently dominating the other. This can be a turn-off for readers expecting a true battle of equals. I also noticed a common sentiment that some plot points were introduced but never fully resolved, which left me feeling a bit unsatisfied. Some readers may find the ML's behavior to be overbearing or even bordering on harassment, depending on their personal preferences.

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Final Verdict

Overall, "When an Alpha is Marked by One of His Own Kind" is an enjoyable read, particularly if you're a fan of e-sports, ABO dynamics, and second-chance romances. The strong chemistry between the leads and the well-written gaming scenes are definite highlights. However, be aware of the potential pitfalls, such as uneven power dynamics and unresolved plot points, before diving in. I'd recommend giving it a try, but with a grain of salt.