Ryuu Kusari no Ori -Kokoro no Uchi no “Kokoro”- (LN)

My Thoughts on Ryuu Kusari no Ori -Kokoro no Uchi no “Kokoro”- (LN)

Okay, so I dove into Ryuu Kusari no Ori -Kokoro no Uchi no “Kokoro”- (quite the mouthful, isn't it?) with a mix of excitement and trepidation, given its blend of action, romance, and darker themes like betrayal and brainwashing. It certainly seemed like a story that could either be incredibly compelling or fall flat, and after reading a fair chunk of the available translation, I'm left with mixed feelings.

First Impressions

My initial reaction was a bit lukewarm, I must admit. The opening chapters felt… deliberate. The story unfolds at a pace that some might find glacial. While I appreciate world-building, I felt like it lingered a bit too long on exposition, mirroring the synopsis a bit too closely for my liking. It didn't immediately grab me.

What Works Well

Despite my initial hesitation, there are definitely aspects of Ryuu Kusari no Ori that I found promising. The sheer breadth of genres it attempts to blend is ambitious, and I can see the potential for a really engaging narrative to emerge as the story progresses. The tags—academy, martial arts, childhood friends, death of loved ones—paint a picture of a complex and potentially emotionally resonant story. The promise of character growth, especially in the face of adversity like betrayal and bullying, is also something that piques my interest.

Areas of Concern

My main concern lies with the pacing and the writing style, which at times felt a bit detached. The story, at least in the early stages, didn't quite pull me in the way I'd hoped. I found myself wanting more immediacy, a stronger connection to the characters and their struggles. The slow burn might eventually pay off, but it requires a certain amount of patience from the reader.

Final Verdict

Ryuu Kusari no Ori -Kokoro no Uchi no “Kokoro”- (LN) is a bit of a mixed bag for me so far. It has the potential to be a really engaging and emotionally resonant story, given its intriguing premise and diverse range of themes. However, the slow pacing and somewhat detached writing style might deter some readers. I'm cautiously optimistic, though, and I'm willing to see where the story goes. If you're a fan of slow-burn fantasy with darker elements and a focus on character development, it might be worth checking out, just be prepared to invest some time and patience.