Mob Protagonist ~ Mob in the Novel But There Is A Problem

My Thoughts on Mob Protagonist ~ Mob in the Novel But There Is A Problem

Alright, let's dive into "Mob Protagonist ~ Mob in the Novel But There Is A Problem." This web novel is quite a ride, and while it has its issues, the core concept and the MC's unique approach kept me hooked. It's a reincarnation story set in a fantasy Japan, where our protagonist finds herself as a background character with a twist – she has a game-like perspective on the world.

First Impressions

Initially, I was a bit thrown off by the opening chapters (1.1 and 1.2). They felt a bit like a disjointed prologue, throwing you into the future with an OP MC without much context. Some readers might find this a bit misleading, as it sets expectations that the story doesn't immediately deliver on. However, pushing past those initial chapters is definitely worth it.

What Works Well

What really shines in this novel is the MC, Miu. Her character is multi-layered. On the surface, she's an innocent and even silly girl, but underneath, she's calculating and ruthless when necessary, especially when it comes to protecting her loved ones. This duality, explained later as a sort of split personality between the original Miu and the reincarnated soul, is what makes her so compelling. I also appreciate that Miu's "mob" persona isn't just about maintaining the original storyline; it's about protecting those around her.

The story also does a great job of fleshing out its characters and world. It explores mature themes and delves into the logical inconsistencies often found in fantasy worlds, like the scarcity of healers. The way the MC interacts with the original storyline and the other reincarnated characters creates a lot of amusing situations.

Areas of Concern

The biggest issue I encountered, and one that many readers echoed, is the translation quality. Inconsistent grammar, pronoun mix-ups, and awkward phrasing can make it difficult to follow the story, especially during action scenes. It's a shame because the underlying story is quite engaging, but the translation can be a real barrier to entry. Also, some readers found the number of ads on the translation website to be overwhelming, making it difficult to read.

Final Verdict

Despite the translation issues and some initial confusion, "Mob Protagonist ~ Mob in the Novel But There Is A Problem" is a surprisingly enjoyable read. The unique MC, the well-developed world, and the engaging plot make it a hidden gem. If you can overlook the translation problems, I'd recommend giving it a shot. It's a fun and quirky story that offers a fresh take on the reincarnation trope.