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Description
The world’s No.1 professional player in [Erosion] , ‘Undead Legend’ Shu Jun, was preparing to retire. Finally returning to reality from virtual reality, Mr. Shu was in great spirits and even planned to confess his feelings. With Shu Jun’s countless calculations, his strategy didn’t get knocked out, his commands didn’t get knocked out and his own team also didn’t get knocked out. But, the world decided to knock him out instead. When he opened his eyes again, he had become the game’s most dangerous monster. Also, this isn’t an E-sports novel.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- jjwxc
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
Saving Unpermitted Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Saving Unpermitted
"Saving Unpermitted" promised a blend of action, romance, and sci-fi intrigue, and I have to say, it largely delivered. The world-building is compelling, and the central relationship is genuinely heartwarming. While it has some flaws, it's a story that stuck with me, and I'd happily recommend it.
First Impressions
Initially, I was hooked by the unique premise. The early chapters throw you right into a post-apocalyptic world where synthetic humans fight against monstrous "Erosion," all within the confines of what seems like a game. The twist, revealed early on, that the game is reality and the synthetics are unknowingly fighting for their lives, is a fantastic hook. It's a dark setup that immediately raises moral questions about humanity's treatment of these beings. I appreciated that the story didn't shy away from these complex themes, exploring environmental degradation and human rights.
What Works Well
The relationship between the MC, Shu Jun, and the ML, Zhu Yanchen, is a major highlight. Their dynamic is built on a foundation of deep trust and affection, which I found refreshing. Even with external forces trying to tear them apart, their commitment to each other remains unwavering. I enjoyed how the story reveals their shared past, adding layers of emotional depth to their present connection. The action sequences are well-written and engaging, and I commend the author for crafting a complicated siege battle that was both understandable and exciting. The MC's powers are also really cool, and I appreciated that he doesn't lose them for the sake of plot contrivance.
Areas of Concern
While I enjoyed the overall story, the pacing felt uneven at times. There were moments where the plot dragged, especially during the political maneuvering and planning phases. The action, at times, felt glossed over or summarized, which was a bit disappointing after the buildup. I also felt that some of the side characters could have been more developed. While they had distinct personalities, I didn't form a strong emotional connection to them, making their fates less impactful. The ending also felt a little rushed, and I would have appreciated more interaction between the MC and ML after the final conflict.
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Final Verdict
Despite its flaws, "Saving Unpermitted" is a worthwhile read. The unique world-building, compelling characters, and heartwarming romance make it a standout novel. If you're looking for a story with action, intrigue, and a healthy dose of "delicious gayness," this one is definitely worth checking out. I'm eager to explore more of this author's work.
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