Description
I thought the otherworldly reincarnation was supposed to come with a cheat and good-looking appearance?! In the game, this was a mob whose name I never even knew at all. He is Clive, stepbrother of the villainess. But this is a fantasy world with magic! There are dungeons, as I later learn! I was hrilled and excited, and I even had my attributes tested, but I didn’t expect to be unable to use magic! Determined to enjoy this world and help his stepsister avoid becoming villains, Clive decides to favour his stepsister anyway, so that she doesn’t become a twisted character. It doesn’t matter if it’s a Otome game or not, he’s going for a happy ending! Clive is determined to achieve a happy ending, but…
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
Reincarnated as a Mob in an Otome Game. I Will Protect My Villainous Sister! Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Reincarnated as a Mob in an Otome Game. I Will Protect My Villainous Sister!
Alright, let's dive into "Reincarnated as a Mob in an Otome Game. I Will Protect My Villainous Sister!" This title certainly grabs your attention, doesn't it? The premise – a protagonist reborn as a mob character dedicated to protecting his villainous sister – had me hoping for a unique and entertaining twist on the isekai genre. However, after spending some time with it, I have mixed feelings.
First Impressions
Initially, I was drawn in by the idea of a brotherly bond overcoming a predetermined narrative. The tags like "age progression," "aristocracy," and "European ambience" painted a picture of a potentially rich and immersive world. I was ready for some lighthearted adventure and maybe even a touch of romance.
What Works Well
The core concept of a mob character actively trying to subvert the otome game's storyline to safeguard his sister is undeniably appealing. The "brother complex" tag, while potentially a bit much for some, hints at a strong familial connection that could drive the plot forward in interesting ways. I can see the potential for comedic situations arising from the protagonist's attempts to manipulate events from the sidelines.
Areas of Concern
Unfortunately, there are some significant issues that hold this novel back. The translation quality seems to be a major stumbling block. I found myself struggling with awkward phrasing and grammatical errors, which made it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story. This is a real shame, as it obscures whatever potential the plot might have.
Beyond the translation, the pacing feels rushed, and the dialogue can be quite clunky. The characters, particularly the female lead, also come across as somewhat one-dimensional. This lack of depth makes it hard to connect with them or invest in their struggles. I was left wanting more nuance and complexity in their personalities.
Final Verdict
"Reincarnated as a Mob in an Otome Game. I Will Protect My Villainous Sister!" has an intriguing premise, but it's currently hampered by translation issues and underdeveloped characters. While the core idea of a protective brother subverting an otome game is appealing, the execution needs significant improvement. Until these issues are addressed, I would hesitate to recommend this novel, even to fans of villainess stories.