Makikomarete Isekai Teni suru Yatsu wa

My Thoughts on Makikomarete Isekai Teni suru Yatsu wa

"Makikomarete Isekai Teni suru Yatsu wa" is a web novel that I approached with mixed expectations, and honestly, those expectations were pretty much met. It's a bit of a rollercoaster, with some genuinely interesting ideas bumping against some significant execution issues. It is what it is - a very average isekai.

First Impressions

The premise is fairly standard: a guy gets caught up in a hero summoning. However, things quickly take a turn when he's accidentally teleported away and gains some seriously overpowered abilities. I was initially intrigued by the potential for a different kind of isekai story, one where the MC isn't necessarily the chosen hero, but has to carve his own path.

What Works Well

I can see why some readers enjoy this story. The MC isn't a spineless doormat, and he actually takes initiative, especially in his relationships. There's a refreshing lack of forced Japanese ideals being imposed on the new world, and he adapts to the cultural differences, which is a plus. The story gives off that "Stats go brrr" energy which I can enjoy at times.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the execution often falls short. The translation quality, especially in the earlier chapters, is rough. It can be difficult to get past the stilted dialogue and awkward phrasing. The pacing feels rushed, with character development taking a backseat to plot progression. Relationships develop too quickly, making it hard to feel emotionally invested. The MC's thought process can be baffling, and his actions sometimes feel inconsistent.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Makikomarete Isekai Teni suru Yatsu wa" is a mixed bag. While it has some interesting concepts and a proactive MC, the poor translation, rushed pacing, and lack of emotional depth hold it back. If you're looking for a light, undemanding read with plenty of action and a harem, you might find something to enjoy here. However, if you prefer well-developed characters, a coherent plot, and a polished translation, you might want to look elsewhere. For me, it's a solid 2.5/5.