I’m Not a Villainess!! Just Because I Can Control Darkness Doesn’t Mean I’m a Bad Person! (LN) Novel Review

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By otonashi satsuki, 音無砂月

3.7

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CompletedjapaneseLight Novel

Genres

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action adventure drama fantasy romance shoujo

Chapters

16 chapters

Started

2017

Description

Sakura was mu*dered by her family. The place she was born in again was exactly the same place she read about in her favorite novel. That is, Leycia, a kingdom that coexists with spirits. The person she was born as was Claudia, a member of the Letsya duke family that commanded the kingdom’s army for generations; and also hated by everyone for the divine protection she received from the dark spirits’ king. Because of that, Claudia was feared by her surroundings from a very young age and her family had a hard time bringing her up. In the novel, Claudia was forced to marry into another kingdom in order to bind a peace treaty. But when Leycia opposed to the pact in the last moment, Claudia was taken as a hostage and mu*dered in the enemy kingdom. Could Sakura who still hold memories of her past life avoid the sorrowful fate of Claudia?

Publication Information

Original Publisher: alphapolis
Original Language: japanese
Type: Light Novel

I’m Not a Villainess!! Just Because I Can Control Darkness Doesn’t Mean I’m a Bad Person! (LN) Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on I’m Not a Villainess!! Just Because I Can Control Darkness Doesn’t Mean I’m a Bad Person! (LN)

This title certainly grabbed my attention, and I dove in hoping for a compelling story about overcoming prejudice. While the initial chapters sparked my interest, I ultimately found myself wrestling with some significant issues that prevented me from fully enjoying the novel.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn to the premise of a dark-skinned protagonist in a fantasy setting, battling societal discrimination due to her powers and appearance. The idea of a character actively working to change her fate in a world stacked against her was quite appealing. I appreciated the early focus on building relationships and navigating a prejudiced society.

What Works Well

The translation quality consistently receives praise, which is always a huge plus. Many readers, including myself, found the initial world-building intriguing, and the setup hinted at a potentially complex narrative. The main character, Claudia, is generally likeable, and her efforts to forge connections despite facing constant negativity resonated with me.

Areas of Concern

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My biggest issue, and one echoed by many other readers, revolves around a major plot point: Claudia's skin color changing due to the Light Spirit King's blessing. This shift felt like a betrayal of the initial premise. The fact that her appearance change led to sudden acceptance and even admiration felt deeply problematic. It undermined the message of overcoming prejudice and instead seemed to suggest that assimilation through conforming to beauty standards was the only path to acceptance.

Furthermore, the intelligence and actions of some characters, particularly the antagonist, Amelia, often felt cartoonish and illogical. This made it difficult to take the conflicts seriously and detracted from the overall narrative. The ending also felt rushed, with plot points resolved too quickly and without sufficient depth.

Final Verdict

"I'm Not a Villainess!!" had the potential to be a truly impactful story. Unfortunately, the execution falters in key areas, particularly concerning the handling of discrimination and the rushed conclusion. While the initial premise and translation quality are commendable, the problematic plot developments ultimately left me disappointed. I would give it a 2.5/5.