I Decided to Not Compete and Quietly Create Dolls Instead Novel Review

My Thoughts on I Decided to Not Compete and Quietly Create Dolls Instead

"I Decided to Not Compete and Quietly Create Dolls Instead" had me intrigued from the start with its unique premise. A reincarnation story where the MC focuses on crafting dolls to avoid otome game flags? Sounds like a fun twist! However, after diving in, my feelings are a bit mixed.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn to the idea of a protagonist who chooses a quiet life of crafting over the usual reincarnation tropes. The concept of spirit dolls and their potential was definitely a hook. I was looking forward to a relaxing slice-of-life story with a touch of fantasy and romance.

What Works Well

The MC, Altirea, is generally likeable. I appreciate that she accepts her new reality early on and doesn't try too hard to act like a child, given her past life. Her internal monologues can be amusing, and her dedication to her craft is endearing. The dolls themselves are a high point, with some readers finding them adorable and their interactions entertaining, especially the "mafia-like doll-kun."

The writing, at least in the early chapters, is often praised for its vocabulary and grammar. Some readers found the translation refreshing and the author's style delightful. The slower pace and focus on internal thoughts appealed to those seeking a more mellow read.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the story seems to suffer from some significant issues. Several readers have pointed out that the plot progression can be jarring, jumping between scenes and timelines without clear transitions. This can make it difficult to follow the narrative and understand the characters' motivations.

Character development is another common criticism. Some feel that the MC remains bland and underdeveloped, with little insight into her past or personality. The world-building also feels shallow, lacking depth and detail regarding the magic system and surrounding environment.

I'm also a bit wary of the potential for a reverse harem situation, especially with younger characters involved. It seems that romantic interests may be adults with feelings for a child.

Final Verdict

"I Decided to Not Compete and Quietly Create Dolls Instead" has a charming premise and likeable characters, but it ultimately falls short in execution. While the initial chapters show promise, issues with plot progression, character development, and world-building detract from the overall experience. If you're a die-hard fan of otome game reincarnation stories, you might find something to enjoy here, but be prepared for a potentially frustrating and unsatisfying read. I'd give it a cautious 3/5 stars.