Fake Holy Sword Story ～I Was Taken Along When I Sold My Childhood Friend～

My Thoughts on Fake Holy Sword Story ～I Was Taken Along When I Sold My Childhood Friend～

This web novel definitely had me intrigued from the start with its quirky title and intriguing premise. The initial chapters promised a comedic fantasy adventure with a unique twist on the hero trope. While it delivered on some fronts, a certain element unfortunately hampered my overall enjoyment.

First Impressions

The setup is undeniably clever. We have Alistar, a protagonist whose primary goal is a life of leisure, cleverly masking his true nature with skillful acting. Then there's Magali, his childhood friend, who seems to be cut from the same cloth. Their interactions, scheming to outdo each other, are initially hilarious. The contrast between their outward appearances and inner thoughts is a goldmine for comedy, and I found myself chuckling at their internal monologues. This dynamic duo held so much promise.

What Works Well

The character interactions, especially between Alistar and Magali, were a definite highlight. Their shared history and mutual understanding of each other's "tr*shy" personalities made for some genuinely entertaining moments. The world-building, while relying on established fantasy tropes, was efficient and served its purpose. The author's writing style is also quite engaging.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the introduction of the Holy Sword is where things started to fall apart for me. While intended to be a plot device to force Alistar into heroic situations, it quickly became an overbearing presence. The sword's forceful control over Alistar, dictating his actions and suppressing his will, grew tiresome. The humor became repetitive, and the forced "justice" felt increasingly annoying. The sword's personality clashed so strongly with Alistar's that it ruined the character and the story. It's a shame because the initial concept had so much potential, but the execution of the Holy Sword's influence ultimately dragged it down.

Final Verdict

"Fake Holy Sword Story" is a mixed bag. The initial chapters are a comedic gem, showcasing a unique dynamic between two self-serving childhood friends. However, the overbearing influence of the Holy Sword and its constant control over the protagonist's actions ultimately detracts from the overall enjoyment. While the banter is good, the sword makes the comedy forced and the plot progression feels repetitive. It's a shame, as the novel's early promise makes its later shortcomings all the more disappointing. I'd give it a 3/5.