Don’t Cry Mama

My Thoughts on Don’t Cry Mama

"Don't Cry Mama" is a completed original web novel that I recently finished reading. It's a blend of adventure, comedy, drama, romance, and yaoi, and I went in expecting a lighthearted romp. Overall, I found it to be a mixed bag, with some elements shining more brightly than others.

First Impressions

The story's premise intrigued me: a fat protagonist navigating a boss-subordinate relationship with a younger love interest, all while dealing with themes of survival and a parent complex. The "fat to fit" trope is present, which can be a hit or miss depending on execution, and I was curious to see how the author would handle it. Initially, I was drawn in by the potential for character growth and the exploration of unconventional relationships.

What Works Well

What I enjoyed most was the underlying message of love transcending appearances and even arising from unexpected places, like a relationship with someone initially perceived as an "enemy." The plot points revolving around the boss-subordinate dynamic were definitely engaging and provided plenty of opportunities for both comedic and dramatic situations. I also appreciated that the story didn't shy away from exploring complex emotions and relationship dynamics. The focus on personal growth and overcoming insecurities was a strong point.

Areas of Concern

While I enjoyed the overall story, there were some aspects that could have been handled better. The protagonist's initial selfishness was a bit off-putting at times, and I felt it hindered my ability to fully connect with him early on. The "fat to fit" journey, while present, wasn't always as central to the plot as I anticipated, which might disappoint some readers looking for a strong focus on that trope.

Final Verdict

"Don't Cry Mama" is a cute and simple read that delivers on its promise of romance and adventure. While it might not be a masterpiece, it offers a pleasant escape with heartwarming themes and a focus on the power of love. If you're looking for a lighthearted yaoi novel with a touch of drama and a message about inner beauty, this might be worth checking out.