Can I Brag About My Very Devoted Wife to You? Novel Review
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By ononata manimani, 斧名田マニマニ
70 chapters
2020
Description
“Shinyama Minato-kun…! Will you make me your bride, please?” Hanae Riko, the most beautiful girl in the school, proposed to me, and before I knew any better, my newlywed life had already begun. My wife was so cute as she always happily follows me around every day and doesn’t want to leave my side even for a moment.She always does all the cleaning, laundry, cooking, sewing, and other household chores like a pro, and her skills are flawless.In addition, she was extremely devoted to me. “I’ve made a fortune in investments so that Minato-kun can play and live for the rest of his life. Use it as you like!” This kind of overzealous service regularly occurred. And I couldn’t help but think it’s adorable how she wagged her invisible tail so wildly whenever I gave her a single word of praise.Yes, in front of me, Riko was like a small dog loving its owner too much. But don’t be conceited.This was a contract marriage.Riko was not in love with me. – When I had finally asked her why she was still so devoted to me despite being under contract, she puffed out her cheeks and responded. “Minato-kun, you’re too cautious about the proposal…” Eh… so it’s fine for us to get married under contract…? This was a love story that started with a marriage at day zero and was just a happy, one-sided love story.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- ga bunko
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
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My Thoughts on Can I Brag About My Very Devoted Wife to You?
This web novel, "Can I Brag About My Very Devoted Wife to You?", had me going back and forth. It's definitely a story with a clear target audience – those who enjoy fluffy, heartwarming romances with a good dose of school life thrown in. However, it's not without its flaws, and whether or not you'll enjoy it hinges on how patient you are with the main character.
First Impressions
Initially, I found myself a bit frustrated. The premise, a devoted wife and a male protagonist with an inferiority complex, is appealing, but the execution in the early chapters felt a bit rough around the edges. I quickly understood why some readers found the MC "insufferable" early on.
What Works Well
Despite my initial reservations, the novel does have its strengths. Once the main character gets over his initial density and insecurities – around chapter 8 or 9, from what I've gathered – the story really takes off. The relationship development after that point is a major draw. It's described as slow and steady, which I appreciate. It allows you to really invest in the couple and their journey. The overall feeling is one of warmth and fluff, which is perfect if you're looking for a lighthearted read to brighten your day. The "diabetes" tag is definitely accurate!
Areas of Concern
My biggest issue, and one that seems to be echoed by other readers, is the main character's initial density and, at times, cowardice. While his backstory provides some justification for his behavior, it can still be a bit grating to read. I also noticed some inconsistencies in the writing, with plot points appearing suddenly without much foreshadowing. This made the story feel less coherent at times and more like a series of loosely connected events. I hope the author considers refining these elements in future works.
Final Verdict
"Can I Brag About My Very Devoted Wife to You?" is a mixed bag. If you're willing to stick with it through the initial chapters and can tolerate a dense protagonist, you'll be rewarded with a sweet and heartwarming romance. However, the early frustrations and occasional inconsistencies in the writing might be a turn-off for some. Overall, I'd recommend it with a caveat: be prepared to exercise some patience!
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