What, the Transition Failed!?……Wait, it was a Success!? (WN) Novel Review
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By ほーち
354 chapters
2017
Description
Poor factory laborer, Todo Yoichi (35 years old, single, working poor) with a certain young man involved in truck incident. Then from the woman who called herself manager, inform him that he just involved in ordinary accident. With a cheat ability they will be reincarnated to sword and magic fantasy world, but unlike the young man, for Yoichi that didn’t have the existence for his reincarnation in that space he will be reconstructed in former body. There is no cheat ability for him but he get [standard skill pack] or something. Yoichi’s [judgment] [infinity storage] [language comprehension] [return] skill that often coming out in light novel. Working poor is want to break free from life that only working for live, while in order to live in another world with hope that begin swelling in his chest, whatever you think this is the former world….
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
What, the Transition Failed!?……Wait, it was a Success!? (WN) Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on What, the Transition Failed!?……Wait, it was a Success!? (WN)
Alright, let's dive into "What, the Transition Failed!?……Wait, it was a Success!? (WN)". This web novel definitely grabbed my attention with its quirky title, and I went in expecting a wild ride. While it wasn't a perfect journey, it had enough interesting elements to keep me reading.
First Impressions
The premise itself is intriguing. A reincarnation gone wrong (or right?), a protagonist thrust into a new world with… unexpected consequences? I was immediately curious to see how the author would handle the setup, especially given the tags like "incest" and "R-18". It promised a story that wasn't afraid to push boundaries, for better or worse.
What Works Well
The protagonist is one of the stronger points. He's practical and generally good-natured, which makes him easy to root for, even when he's navigating morally gray situations. The story also throws some fun ideas into the mix. The world-building, while not groundbreaking, is solid enough to support the plot, and the magic system has some interesting nuances that kept me engaged. I especially liked how the author explored the protagonist's cheat abilities and their impact on the world around him.
Areas of Concern
Honestly, the execution sometimes felt a little rough around the edges. While the ideas were there, the writing itself could benefit from some polish. Certain plot points felt rushed, and the pacing occasionally felt uneven. The harem aspect also felt somewhat… easy. The female characters, while present, could use more depth and complexity to truly shine.
Final Verdict
"What, the Transition Failed!?……Wait, it was a Success!? (WN)" is a flawed but entertaining read. If you're looking for a polished masterpiece, this might not be it. However, if you're willing to overlook some rough edges and embrace the story's quirky charm, you might find yourself enjoying the ride. It's a fun, albeit imperfect, exploration of reincarnation, power, and the complexities of relationships in a fantastical setting. I'd give it a solid 3 out of 5 stars.
