The Wishes I Made, Enemies Reap Double

My Thoughts on The Wishes I Made, Enemies Reap Double

This web novel, "The Wishes I Made, Enemies Reap Double," certainly presents an interesting, if somewhat uneven, experience. With a premise centered around a protagonist navigating multiple timelines and battling reborn "protagonists," it had the potential to be a real standout. However, the execution seems to fall short in some key areas.

First Impressions

Initially, the story hooked me with its reincarnation-revenge concept. The idea of a main character armed with future knowledge and a "Wishing System" facing off against those seeking to dethrone him is undeniably appealing. The comedy tag also drew me in, promising a lighthearted take on the villainous protagonist trope. However, it quickly became apparent that the translation quality and some bizarre character interactions might be a hurdle.

What Works Well

The humor is definitely a strong point. The sheer absurdity of the "protagonists'" constant failures and the MC's often over-the-top reactions can be genuinely funny. I can see why many readers found the comedic aspects to be the most enjoyable part of the story, even if the world-building feels a bit underdeveloped. The core concept of the MC knowing everything because he's lived through the novel multiple times is intriguing and provides a solid foundation for the plot. Also, the plot of the protagonists eventually becoming brothers with the MC is a good one.

Areas of Concern

The translation issues are a significant problem. Poor translation can make it difficult to fully engage with the narrative and appreciate the author's intended tone. Beyond that, some of the character interactions come across as strange, particularly the female lead's initial reaction to the MC's borderline stalkerish behavior.

The plot also seems to lose focus at times, dwelling too heavily on the antagonists' perspectives and sidelining the MC's actions. I found it frustrating that the story shifts from the MC building his business and interacting with women, to focusing entirely on the "protagonists" and their constant failures. This shift in perspective can make the MC seem less like a cunning mastermind and more like a passive observer in his own story.

Final Verdict

"The Wishes I Made, Enemies Reap Double" has moments of brilliance, primarily in its comedic elements and intriguing premise. However, the translation quality, pacing issues, and sometimes questionable character interactions hold it back from reaching its full potential. If you're looking for a lighthearted read with a unique concept and don't mind overlooking some flaws, it might be worth a try. Otherwise, proceed with caution. I'd give it a cautious 3/5.