The Villainess Becomes a Commoner

My Thoughts on The Villainess Becomes a Commoner

"The Villainess Becomes a Commoner" presents a unique twist on the villainess trope, and while it has its moments, it ultimately falls short of being a truly compelling read. The premise is intriguing: a man transmigrates into the body of a high school girl, Kotone, who is infamous for her terrible behavior. He must then navigate the social minefield she created while also figuring out the mystery of his own death.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the gender-bender aspect and the promise of a reformed villainess narrative. The early chapters focus on the MC trying to rebuild Kotone's ruined reputation and adjust to life as a high school girl. I appreciated the slice-of-life elements and the slow-burn character development.

What Works Well

The concept of the "Twelve Families" and their quirky traits adds a layer of unique world-building. The idea that the MC is dealing with the consequences of Kotone's actions in the same world, rather than an isekai setting, creates interesting possibilities for exploring past connections and unresolved issues. Some readers found the MC's character to be particularly interesting, praising her complex personality and the slow reveal of her backstory. The blend of drama, slice of life, and comedy also works well in the beginning, creating a balanced and engaging experience.

Areas of Concern

However, the novel suffers from several issues. The gender-bender aspect feels underdeveloped, with the MC's adjustment to life as a female being glossed over. The pacing is also a major problem, with excessive internal monologues that drag down the story. A common criticism is that the plot loses focus after chapter 100, shifting away from the interesting school characters and introducing a cast of eccentric, caricature-like characters from the MC's past life. This shift in focus can make the novel feel disjointed and less engaging. The MC's passivity and acceptance of unfair treatment in the early chapters can also be frustrating.

Final Verdict

Overall, "The Villainess Becomes a Commoner" has potential, but it's held back by pacing issues, underdeveloped gender-bender elements, and a loss of focus in the later chapters. While the initial premise and unique world-building are intriguing, the execution ultimately falls short of delivering a truly satisfying read. I'd recommend approaching this novel with caution and being prepared for a bumpy ride.