The Beginning Novel Review
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By qi dao jun, 祈祷君
63 chapters
2019
Description
Li Shiqing gets on a bus, expecting to reach her destination as usual, but instead embarks on a journey of death in an infinite time loop. After repeatedly experiencing death on the bus, the heroine is on the verge of collapse and tries to get off the bus, thus dragging her co-star Xiao Heyun into the time loop as well. After all their attempts, they decide to find out who is behind all this and end the time loop on the bus. A time loop mystery set on a bus, the hero and heroine try everything they can to save the lives of the bus and to stop the time loop. For the reader, this is both a suspenseful escape room novel and a self-help guide for ordinary people who are “stuck for a day”, combining the thrill of an “infinite stream” prophet with the excitement of suspense.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- jjwxc
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
The Beginning Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on The Beginning
"The Beginning" certainly grabbed my attention with its blend of adventure, comedy, mystery, and even a touch of the supernatural. It's a unique story that took me on a thrilling ride, and while it wasn't perfect, the overall experience was definitely worthwhile.
First Impressions
Initially, I was intrigued by the premise. A time loop with ordinary protagonists trying to prevent a tragedy? It felt fresh and relatable. I dove in expecting a thrilling mystery, and for the most part, that's exactly what I got. The early chapters pulled me in quickly, and I found myself invested in the characters' struggles.
What Works Well
The character development really stood out to me. The protagonists felt like real people, flaws and all. I especially appreciated that they weren't overpowered; they were just trying to survive and figure things out. The comedic elements were a welcome surprise, providing moments of levity amidst the tension. The mystery itself was well-crafted, keeping me guessing and eager to uncover the truth. The world-building was also impressive, creating an immersive experience. I found myself completely engrossed in the story.
Areas of Concern
While I enjoyed the novel immensely, there were a few areas that could be improved. The translation, while generally good, sometimes had some issues with pronoun usage ("he," "she," "they") and occasional redundancy, which could be a bit confusing. Also, while the first part of the story was excellent, I found the second part less engaging. It felt a bit like a self-insert fanfic, which wasn't quite my cup of tea.
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Final Verdict
Overall, "The Beginning" is a captivating novel with a unique premise and well-developed characters. Despite some minor translation issues and a less compelling second part, the engaging storyline, comedic moments, and thrilling mystery make it a worthwhile read. I'd recommend it to anyone looking for a story that blends genres and offers a refreshing take on the time loop trope. I give it a solid 4 out of 5 stars.
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