Sword Saint’s Disciple Novel Review
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By nikaidou fuuto, 二階堂風都
150 chapters
2015
Description
When he was reincarnated into a different world, he had turned into a woman. Furthermore, when her parents died in a disaster caused by a demon attack, an elderly man saved and brought her up. That man was a former knight of the Kingdom who was once renowned as Sword Saint. Time passed, and a letter of summons from the Kingdom arrived for her Sword Saint Grandfather – who has retired deep in the countryside’s mountains for some reason. She then went to the Royal Capital as a representative for her Grandfather who hurt his lower back, in order to pay back his kindness even a little. This is a story of the strongest female swordsman, trained by the Sword Saint himself, as she goes on an adventure in an alternate world.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- syosetu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
Sword Saint’s Disciple Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Sword Saint’s Disciple
Alright, let's dive into "Sword Saint’s Disciple." I've spent some time with it, considered different viewpoints, and I'm ready to share my take. Overall, it's a mixed bag, but with some definite potential.
First Impressions
My initial impression was…gentle. The story starts off rather slowly, focusing on world-building and introducing our protagonist. It's not the kind of opening that grabs you by the throat, but more of a leisurely stroll down a scenic path. I can see how some readers might find the beginning uneventful, especially in the first few chapters as the MC makes their way down the mountain.
What Works Well
The characters are a definite highlight. The MC, while perhaps a bit naive due to their secluded upbringing, is likeable and relatable. I appreciate that the gender bender aspect isn't the central focus, but rather a part of the character's backstory. This allows the story to explore other themes and character development without being bogged down by the trope. The companions introduced so far are unique and interesting, adding depth to the overall narrative. The world-building is also well-done, creating an immersive fantasy setting that I found myself enjoying.
Areas of Concern
While the story has potential, the execution could use some polish. The pacing, particularly in the beginning, is a bit slow, and it takes a while for the plot to really pick up steam. I also have to address the translation quality. While the story is comprehensible, there are noticeable grammar and syntax errors that can be distracting. I really think the story would benefit from a skilled editor to refine the prose and improve the overall reading experience.
Final Verdict
"Sword Saint’s Disciple" is a decent read with some charming qualities. The characters are engaging, the world is well-crafted, and the story has the potential to become something truly special. However, the slow pacing and translation issues hold it back from reaching its full potential. If you're looking for a lighthearted fantasy with a unique premise and are willing to overlook some rough edges, then this might be worth checking out. I'm giving it a cautious recommendation, hoping to see improvements in future chapters.
