One Day, the Engagement was Suddenly Cancelled. ……My Little Sister’s. Novel Review
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By りんぐ
5 chapters
2017
Description
The noble Duke Walkley family from the Elliot Kingdom. The heir, Alphonse von Walkley, was too weak to go to school because of his natural constitution. One day such Alphonse. He was in good physical condition, so he went to school for the first time in about two days and enjoyed his student life. And then, the lunch break when he visited. The First Prince of the Elliot Kingdom came when he tried to eat with his sister and her three friends at the school cafeteria. The Prince suddenly said things startling Alphonse and company. According to him, he wants to cancel his engagement with his sister…
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- syosetu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
One Day, the Engagement was Suddenly Cancelled. ……My Little Sister’s. Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on One Day, the Engagement was Suddenly Cancelled. ……My Little Sister’s.
This novel, "One Day, the Engagement was Suddenly Cancelled. ……My Little Sister’s," is a bit of a mixed bag. It’s a short, complete story that aims to play with villainess tropes, but it doesn't quite hit all the marks. It has moments that are charming and surprising, but it also suffers from pacing issues and underdeveloped relationships.
First Impressions
Initially, I was intrigued by the premise. The idea of a sudden engagement cancellation in a world of nobles and magical technology has a certain appeal. I dove in expecting a fun, potentially angsty ride, but I quickly found myself wanting more depth.
What Works Well
The plot twist, while controversial, definitely caught my attention. The extra chapter, in particular, seems to be a highlight for many, described as hilarious and well-hinted. It seems to be the most memorable part of the novel, providing a comedic payoff that some found satisfying. If you are looking for a light-hearted story with a surprising twist and are not too concerned about in-depth character development, this novel may be worth a try.
Areas of Concern
The pacing is a significant issue. The story feels rushed, failing to establish a strong atmosphere or emotional connection. The relationship between the main character and his "sister" feels particularly underdeveloped, raising questions about its purpose within the narrative. This lack of development makes the ending feel abrupt and somewhat unearned. The characters themselves felt a bit flat and one-dimensional. The engagement break event felt underwhelming and uninvolving.
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Final Verdict
"One Day, the Engagement was Suddenly Cancelled. ……My Little Sister’s" is a quick and easy read that has some enjoyable moments, especially the extra chapter. However, its rushed pacing, underdeveloped relationships, and controversial plot twist ultimately hold it back. If you're looking for a light, cliché-filled story with a surprising twist, this might be worth your time, but be prepared for a potentially unsatisfying experience. I would give it a 3 out of 5.