My Omega Fiancé a Bursts Novel Review

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By 不吃姜的胖子

4.2

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CompletedchineseWeb Novel

Genres

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comedy drama romance school life yaoi

Chapters

96 chapters

Started

2020

Description

Jiang Heng is a rare occurrence. As an Omega, he cannot smell any Alpha’s pheromone, and also, there is his susceptibility period. His pheromone during his susceptibility period is very grumpy and makes him aggressive and his glands leak the sweet smell of his pheromones during estrus. The doctor told him that only Shen Huaizhi, who was 100% compatible with his own pheromone, could help him. As an Omega who carries others’ burdens on his shoulders, fights, and beats many people, Shen Huaizhi wouldn’t mark him. Later, Jiang Heng, who was sent to his fiance’s school by his parents for his “physical health”, couldn’t open the cap of his water bottle and couldn’t climb three floors of a building. When he felt a little discomfort, he bent his head and revealed the back of his neck: “Bite me, brother.” Shen Huaizhi is an excellent Alpha in all aspects. After being forced to accept his parents’ arrangement of his fiance who is in his class, he always upholds a belief in life: Stay away from Omegas, especially from Jiang Heng. Even He is looking for him when he opens a water bottle cap! Look at him out of breath when climbing only three floors! Expose the glands in front of him without any scruples! What strange creatures are Omegas! Later, Jiang Heng entered a susceptible period, and the sweet pheromone smell enveloped the entire classroom. Shen Huaizhi’s hand clasped his head against his own chest: “Call me out in a nice voice, and I will help you.” Jiang Heng, who was soothed by his pheromones, said: “Brother…please, mark me… …”

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

My Omega Fiancé a Bursts Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on My Omega Fiancé a Bursts

"My Omega Fiancé a Bursts" promised a sweet and funny omegaverse story, and for the most part, it delivered. I found myself chuckling at the antics of the main characters, especially the omega protagonist who's a bit of a rebellious tease. The premise is simple: an omega with a unique pheromone condition is matched with a cold, but incredibly capable alpha to help manage his health. It’s a classic setup, but the execution had me hooked.

First Impressions

The initial chapters pulled me right in with their lighthearted tone and hints of deeper emotional layers. I was immediately invested in seeing how the relationship between the seemingly mismatched leads would develop. The author built a solid foundation with their personalities. The omega is strong and mischievous, while the alpha is a stoic genius. I was eager to see them break down each other's walls.

What Works Well

The central romance is undoubtedly the strongest aspect of this novel. The "protagonist falls in love first" trope is well-executed. It was refreshing to see the omega actively pursuing the alpha. Their dynamic is engaging, with plenty of playful banter and genuine moments of tenderness. I also appreciated the absence of major misunderstandings derailing their relationship. The side characters, particularly the ML's parents, added to the overall charm of the story. They provided a supportive and loving contrast to the MC's more complicated family life.

Areas of Concern

However, I can't ignore the issues with the translation. While the story itself is undeniably cute, the translation quality can be quite rough. Some parts feel incomplete or incoherent, leaving me confused about the plot. It's frustrating because the underlying story is so enjoyable, but the poor translation hinders the reading experience.

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Final Verdict

Despite the translation issues and the darker family drama, I still found "My Omega Fiancé a Bursts" to be a worthwhile read. The engaging romance, the strong leads, and the overall sweetness of the story outweigh the negatives. If you're a fan of omegaverse stories with a focus on character development and a healthy dose of humor, then I recommend giving this novel a try. Just be prepared to overlook some rough patches in the translation. Overall, I give it a solid 4 out of 5 stars.