May I Ask For One Final Thing? Novel Review

My Thoughts on May I Ask For One Final Thing?

This novel definitely grabbed my attention with its synopsis, and after diving into the available chapters, I have some thoughts. It's a mixed bag, to be sure, but there's a core of entertainment that shines through, making it worth considering.

First Impressions

The initial hook is strong. We're introduced to a seemingly perfect oujo-sama who's actually a pressure cooker of violent tendencies, and that contrast is immediately hilarious and engaging. The first chapter or so is pure catharsis, and the sheer audacity of the female lead, Scarlet, is both shocking and refreshing. It's the kind of opening that makes you want to immediately tell all your friends.

What Works Well

Scarlet herself is the biggest draw. She's described as a "mad-dog princess," and that's a perfect summary. I love that she doesn't hesitate to use her fists, and the comedic timing of her inner monologue is fantastic. The story shines when it focuses on her wreaking havoc and cleaning up the aristocracy, and I found myself rooting for her every step of the way. It's a refreshing change from the typical noble girl MC. I also appreciate that the story isn't afraid to prioritize the plot of dismantling corrupt officials over the romance.

Areas of Concern

However, there are some issues. A few readers have expressed frustration with the male lead, finding him to be an overbearing and stereotypical "perfect prince." Some feel that he undermines Scarlet's agency and that the power dynamic is unfairly skewed in his favor. While some readers' opinions of the ML improve over time, this is definitely a point to consider if you're sensitive to gendered power imbalances in stories.

Final Verdict

May I Ask For One Final Thing? is a flawed but entertaining read. If you're looking for a badass female lead who's not afraid to punch first and ask questions later, this might be right up your alley. However, be aware of the potential issues with the male lead and the pacing. If you're on the fence, checking out the manga adaptation might be a good way to get a feel for the story beyond the initial chapters. Despite its drawbacks, the sheer entertainment value of Scarlet's antics makes it a worthwhile experience, at least for now.