Description
Evan Douglas despite being born in nobility, he was bullied by everyone in his family due to his low mana capacity and even more due to his black hair and eyes that does not run in the family. The only person who is kind to him is his maid Serafina from the wolf beastman race that is of similar age and he is later exiled from the family and Serafina follows him. But either by luck or fate, after suffering a hit in the head, Evan started having dreams of a place with extremely high-technology beyond anything he could imagine, on it he saw dolls being controlled by some strange magic and glowing windows with moving pictures. This dreams leads him to develop a new magic he calls control magic, that does not belong to any of the known elements. Now Evan with his new abilities goes adventuring with his maid Serafina.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- alphapolis
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
Isekai wo Seigyo Mahou de Kirihirake! Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Isekai wo Seigyo Mahou de Kirihirake!
After diving into "Isekai wo Seigyo Mahou de Kirihirake!", I've come away with some mixed feelings. The premise definitely has potential, but the execution seems to be a bit of a bumpy ride.
First Impressions
Initially, I was intrigued by the unique twist on the isekai trope. Instead of a full reincarnation, the protagonist gains fragmented memories of another world, which is a refreshing change from the usual formula. This element immediately sets it apart and hints at a potentially deeper exploration of identity and world-building. It’s enough to pique my interest and make me want to see where the author takes it.
What Works Well
The early chapters focus on the protagonist's interactions with his beast girl servant, and these moments provide some lighthearted fluff. The dynamic between them, especially in their younger years, offers a glimpse into the potential for character development and heartwarming interactions. The translation quality, at least in the initial chapters, is commendable. A smooth and grammatically sound translation greatly enhances the reading experience, allowing you to focus on the story without getting bogged down by awkward phrasing. The pace is also good and it's easy to read.
Areas of Concern
My main concern stems from the story's pacing and overall plot structure. The narrative seems to fall into a repetitive pattern of "problem arises, protagonist solves it, repeat." This formulaic approach could lead to a lack of depth and hinder the development of more complex relationships and overarching storylines. The "isekai" element itself feels somewhat underdeveloped. The fragmented memories, while intriguing, don't seem to significantly impact the plot or character development beyond providing the protagonist with knowledge and skills. It feels more like a convenient plot device than an integral part of the narrative.
Final Verdict
"Isekai wo Seigyo Mahou de Kirihirake!" has a promising premise and some enjoyable early moments, but it falls short of delivering a truly compelling isekai experience. The repetitive plot structure and underdeveloped "isekai" elements hold it back from reaching its full potential. While the translation quality is a definite plus, the story needs more depth and originality to stand out in the crowded isekai genre. I'd say it's worth a try if you're looking for a light and easy read, but don't expect a groundbreaking masterpiece.
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