I Have Immortality in the Cultivation World Novel Review
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By carpenter rice green, 木工米青, 贰更2
467 chapters
2022
Description
When Zhou Yi woke up, he realized that he had become the prison guard of the Heavenly Prison. Although he was fortunate enough to find a Fruit of Eternal Life, he did not possess any powers to protect himself. In a world of cultivation where demons and monsters roamed freely, Zhou Yi decided to hide himself and train for thousands of years. Time passed by quickly. The child he had freed 100 years ago had become the founder of the Great Qian Empire. The teenager he had helped 1000 years ago had become the elder of a celestial sect. The pet he had kept 10000 years ago had become the Absolute Demon King of Foreign Lands. This is the story of a normal person who has eternal life, the story of how he watched countless events unfold and eventually becomes the Supreme Celestial of Eternal Life.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- qidian
- English Publisher
- webnovel
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
I Have Immortality in the Cultivation World Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on I Have Immortality in the Cultivation World
I dove into "I Have Immortality in the Cultivation World" with a healthy dose of curiosity, and I've come out with mixed feelings. It's a novel that shows real promise, but also presents some significant hurdles to fully enjoying the experience.
First Impressions
Initially, I found myself a little underwhelmed. The opening chapters felt a bit slow, and I wasn't immediately hooked. However, several readers mentioned that the story truly takes off once the protagonist fully enters the cultivation world, and I have to agree. That's where the narrative gains momentum and the world-building really shines.
What Works Well
One of the strongest aspects of this novel is its pacing. I appreciated that the author doesn't seem to bog things down with unnecessary exposition or repetitive descriptions. The story moves forward at a brisk pace, allowing for engaging plot development and character growth without feeling like the author is trying to stretch things out. The protagonist's approach to life is also refreshing; he's not a pushover, but he also isn't reckless. This balanced approach makes him relatable and easy to root for. I also found the world-building quite intriguing, and the author has crafted a unique setting that offers plenty of opportunities for adventure and exploration.
Areas of Concern
Unfortunately, one major issue seems to plague the later chapters: the translation quality. I've seen comments indicating that the translation becomes increasingly inconsistent, with errors in sect names, character genders, and even missing sections of chapters. This is a serious problem that can significantly detract from the reading experience, making it difficult to follow the plot and stay invested in the characters. It's a shame, because the underlying story seems genuinely compelling, but poor translation can make it almost unreadable.
Final Verdict
"I Have Immortality in the Cultivation World" has the potential to be a truly great novel. The fast-paced plot, engaging protagonist, and interesting world-building are all strong points in its favor. However, the inconsistent translation quality is a significant drawback that needs to be addressed. If you're willing to overlook the translation issues, or perhaps wait for a revised translation, there's a good chance you'll find something to enjoy here. But be warned: the rough translation can make the experience frustrating at times.
