Former General Is Undead Knight

My Thoughts on Former General Is Undead Knight

"Former General Is Undead Knight" presents an intriguing premise: a loyal general betrayed and resurrected as an undead warrior. I dove into this web novel with high hopes, ready for a dark fantasy tale of revenge and redemption. While there are definitely aspects I enjoyed, it's not without its flaws.

First Impressions

The initial setup is compelling. The idea of a powerful, honourable knight grappling with his undead existence and the betrayal that led to it immediately grabbed my attention. I was eager to see how Lambert, the MC, would navigate this new reality and what kind of mark he would leave on the world. The story starts strong by emphasizing the MC's strength while balancing it with his lack of knowledge of the world.

What Works Well

The action is a definite strong point. Many readers, myself included, appreciate a powerful protagonist who can decisively deal with his enemies, and Lambert certainly fits the bill. He's not invincible, but he's undeniably "broken" in a satisfying way. I also enjoyed the world-building, particularly the political intrigue hinted at in the background. The concept of the MC being so strong that the King felt threatened is interesting. I also liked the MC's personality, which is described as blunt, sometimes cold-blooded, but also possessing a certain "cuteness," making him surprisingly relatable. This internal conflict made him feel more human, despite being undead.

Areas of Concern

However, some aspects held the novel back. The plot is slow at times, and the story felt like a collection of loosely connected arcs. I can see how some readers might find this repetitive, with the MC wandering from place to place, getting involved in local conflicts, and then moving on. The side characters also suffer from this episodic structure, often being abandoned before they can truly develop. While some enjoy the political side of the novel, others might find it a bit boring.

Final Verdict

"Former General Is Undead Knight" is a mixed bag. It has moments of brilliance, particularly in its action sequences and the MC's unique personality. However, the slow pacing, episodic plot structure, and potentially divisive ending prevent it from reaching its full potential. If you're looking for a dark fantasy with an overpowered MC and don't mind a potentially frustrating conclusion, it might be worth a read. Otherwise, proceed with caution.