But You Said You’d Give Me Delicious Candy!!

My Thoughts on But You Said You’d Give Me Delicious Candy!!

This web novel sequel had me eager to jump back into the world of Marie, the baker-turned-hero. While the initial short story was a delightful surprise, this continuation, focusing on Mii-chan, felt a little different. It's a complete story, but I'm left wanting more of what made the first part so special.

First Impressions

The initial charm of the original story definitely carries over, at least in glimpses. The world is still whimsical and the characters are endearing. However, the shift in perspective to Mii-chan, Marie's adopted daughter, changes the dynamic considerably. It's a slice-of-life story, but the focus is less on Marie's unique baking-powered heroism and more on Mii-chan's experiences, particularly with a visiting circus.

What Works Well

The cuteness factor is undeniable. Mii-chan's perspective offers a fresh lens through which to view the newly founded nation, and the story maintains a lighthearted tone for the most part. There are genuinely heartwarming moments, like the "funeral" for a fallen hero. The author clearly has a knack for creating engaging characters and a cozy atmosphere. I also appreciated the hints of something larger at play, leaving me curious about the world's lore and the underlying mysteries surrounding characters like Zelos and the circus troupe.

Areas of Concern

My main concern is that the sequel doesn't quite capture the magic of the original. The humor, which was central to the first story, feels toned down. I was also hoping for more development of Marie's kingdom and perhaps some romance between her and the Dragon King. Instead, the focus is primarily on Mii-chan's experiences, which, while cute, feel like a side story rather than a continuation of the main narrative. The shift in focus can leave you feeling like the initial plot threads were left hanging. The overall story felt somewhat incomplete and lacking in the same punch as the first.

Final Verdict

"But You Said You’d Give Me Delicious Candy!!" is a sweet and enjoyable read, but it falls short of its predecessor. While the world and characters remain charming, the shift in focus and the toned-down humor make it feel like a pleasant side story rather than a true sequel. I'd recommend it for those looking for a lighthearted slice-of-life tale, but those expecting a continuation of Marie's heroic baking adventures might be slightly disappointed.