Actually, I was the Real One Novel Review

My Thoughts on Actually, I was the Real One

"Actually, I was the Real One" is a web novel that initially hooked me with its intriguing premise: a regressed protagonist, Keira, seeking to avoid a tragic fate. It's a story about second chances, but also about self-discovery and finding joy after a life lived in service of others. While it has its drawbacks, there are some elements that make this novel a worthwhile read.

First Impressions

The beginning is definitely a strong point. I found myself immediately sympathizing with Keira and invested in her journey. The early chapters do a great job of establishing the pain of her past life and her determination to forge a different path. The initial chapters are heart-wrenching, setting a tone that lingers throughout the story. It's easy to root for Keira as she navigates her new reality.

What Works Well

One of the most appealing aspects is Keira's character development. She starts as a cold, aloof noblewoman, but gradually learns to embrace life and build genuine connections. This transformation feels organic, with Keira struggling and making mistakes along the way. I also really appreciated the supporting characters, especially the knights, who provide moments of levity and warmth. They add a layer of charm to the story and help Keira on her journey. The plot, while sometimes veering into darker territory, manages to keep you engaged with the twists and turns.

Areas of Concern

While I enjoyed many aspects of the novel, it's not without its flaws. Some readers may find the pacing slow at times, particularly in the early chapters. One common criticism I've noticed is the lack of a strong romantic element. If you're primarily seeking a romance-driven story, you might be disappointed. Additionally, some found the antagonist's actions and motivations confusing, especially as the story progresses. The novel seems to shift gears, which can be jarring. It doesn't quite decide what genre it wants to be.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Actually, I was the Real One" is a decent read if you're looking for a character-driven story about self-discovery and found family. While the lack of romance and the sometimes uneven plot can be drawbacks, Keira's journey and the engaging supporting characters make it an enjoyable experience. I'd recommend it with the caveat that it might not fully deliver on all its initial promises.