A Court Blacksmith, whom was Condemned for being an ‘Iron-Smelling Woman’, was Picked up by a Friendly Guild and Attained Happiness

My Thoughts on A Court Blacksmith, whom was Condemned for being an ‘Iron-Smelling Woman’, was Picked up by a Friendly Guild and Attained Happiness

This title is quite a mouthful, isn't it? But after diving into the story, I can see where it's coming from. It's a classic setup with a blacksmith heroine, a royal court that doesn't appreciate her, and a guild that welcomes her with open arms. Overall, it's a mixed bag, but there are some enjoyable elements.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the premise. A talented blacksmith, unfairly dismissed and finding solace in a guild? Sounds like a recipe for a heartwarming story. The early chapters are sweet, and the idea of a female protagonist excelling in a typically male-dominated field is appealing. However, as I read on, I couldn't help but notice some inconsistencies and pacing issues.

What Works Well

The core concept of the story is its strongest point. Seeing the MC, a skilled blacksmith, finally find a place where her talents are appreciated is genuinely satisfying. There's a certain charm to the found-family dynamic within the guild. I also appreciate that the story doesn't shy away from showing the MC's emotional vulnerability after her experiences at the royal court. It's refreshing to see a character who doesn't immediately bounce back from trauma.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the story suffers from some significant flaws. The plot can feel rushed and somewhat illogical at times. Motivations aren't always clear, and events sometimes seem to happen simply to move the plot forward, regardless of whether they make sense in the world. The quick pace also hinders character development, especially when it comes to the romantic relationship. The transition from one love interest to another felt abrupt and unconvincing. The world-building also feels underdeveloped, with some elements, like the power dynamics between the kingdom and the adventurers' guild, not making a lot of sense.

Final Verdict

"A Court Blacksmith..." is a light and easy read, but don't expect a masterpiece. It has a predictable plot and some underdeveloped elements. If you're looking for a quick, cliché-filled story with a focus on a female blacksmith finding her place, you might enjoy it. However, if you prefer stories with well-developed characters, logical plots, and strong world-building, this might not be the one for you. I'd give it a tentative 3 out of 5 stars. It's not terrible, but it could be so much better.