The Fake Marquis’ Son Is Now Living Freely After Having Fallen to the Status of a Commoner and Exiled Abroad, Huh? Can You Come Back? Of Course That’s Impossible.
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By つくも茄子
87 chapters
2023
Description
Sabio Pazzini, the second son of a prestigious noble family with a lineage of magicians, was born with a ‘no magic’ which was judged during a magical assessment. Despite lacking magical abilities, Sabio possessed an exceptionally brilliant mind, and his family warmly supported him. One fateful day, it was revealed that Sabio was not of noble blood but instead a changeling of the fairies, as the priest declared. The true heir was a beautiful angelic boy resembling his family. Consequently, Sabio was exiled from the country as a ‘criminal conspiring against the royal and noble families.’ In the neighboring country, Sabio registered with a guild and embarked on his second life under the name ‘Kokuyou’.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- kakuyomu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
The Fake Marquis’ Son Is Now Living Freely After Having Fallen to the Status of a Commoner and Exiled Abroad, Huh? Can You Come Back? Of Course That’s Impossible. Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on The Fake Marquis’ Son Is Now Living Freely After Having Fallen to the Status of a Commoner and Exiled Abroad, Huh? Can You Come Back? Of Course That’s Impossible.
This title is certainly a mouthful, and after diving into the story, I can see why opinions are so varied. It's a bit of a mixed bag, with some genuinely interesting concepts overshadowed by some execution issues. It's got potential, but definitely requires managing expectations.
First Impressions
Initially, the premise hooked me. A "fake" marquis' son cast out and forced to make his own way? Sounds like a recipe for revenge, growth, or at least some compelling drama. However, the story quickly veers away from the protagonist's direct experience, focusing instead on the fallout experienced by those who wronged him. This wasn't necessarily a bad thing, but it certainly wasn't what I initially signed up for.
What Works Well
I found the concept of exploring the consequences faced by those who abandoned the MC to be quite intriguing. It's a refreshing take on the typical "exiled hero" trope. The world-building, while somewhat limited, has a certain charm, and the idea of a protagonist who is relatively carefree and unburdened by vengeance is appealing. The initial chapters set the stage for some interesting character studies, particularly in examining the motivations and fates of the women who left him. The author seems to be trying to depict real-life agonies.
Areas of Concern
The biggest issue I encountered was the narrative's disjointedness. The story jumps around quite a bit, with significant time skips and abrupt changes in location and circumstance. The MC's journey often feels rushed, lacking the depth and development needed to fully invest in his experiences. We get glimpses of his adventures, but they're often fleeting and underdeveloped. Furthermore, the frequent shifts in perspective can be jarring, pulling me out of the MC's story and into the heads of characters whose motivations aren't always clear or compelling. The writing quality could definitely be improved upon.
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Final Verdict
"The Fake Marquis’ Son…" is a web novel with some interesting ideas that, unfortunately, struggles with execution. The unique premise and focus on the consequences faced by others are intriguing, but the disjointed narrative, underdeveloped characters, and frequent perspective shifts detract from the overall experience. If you're looking for a traditional revenge story or a tightly plotted adventure, you might be disappointed. However, if you're willing to embrace a somewhat unconventional narrative with a focus on character studies and a carefree protagonist, you might find something to enjoy. Proceed with caution, and manage your expectations accordingly.