Thank You for Abandoning Our Engagement!

My Thoughts on Thank You for Abandoning Our Engagement!

"Thank You for Abandoning Our Engagement!" is a short and sweet story that promises a quick escape, but it left me feeling a little… empty, to be honest. It's got all the trappings of a fun villainess tale – a broken engagement, a noble setting, and a protagonist eager to chase her dreams. However, the execution felt rushed, leaving me wanting more substance.

First Impressions

The premise is definitely intriguing. A noble girl, stuck in an unwanted engagement with a prince, gets a chance to break free and pursue her true passion. The initial setup had potential, especially the idea of her being more excited about the annulment than heartbroken. I was ready for a fun, comedic romp.

What Works Well

The story does deliver on its title; the engagement is indeed abandoned! The protagonist's enthusiasm for her dream is also quite infectious. There's a certain charm in her single-minded focus, and I appreciated that the prince and her brother seemed to genuinely care about her happiness, even if their methods were a bit questionable. I can appreciate the set up of the story and how it all comes together.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the brevity of the story is also its biggest weakness. The plot feels underdeveloped, and several elements are introduced without proper explanation or payoff. The characters, including the protagonist herself, feel like sketches rather than fully realized individuals. The world-building is virtually non-existent, leaving me with a lot of unanswered questions about the setting and the societal norms.

Final Verdict

"Thank You for Abandoning Our Engagement!" is a light and fluffy read that might appeal to those looking for a very short and simple story. However, if you're seeking depth, intricate world-building, or well-developed characters, you'll likely be disappointed. It's more of a trailer for a potentially interesting story than a satisfying experience in itself. I would give it a 2.5/5. It has potential, but it needs more substance.