Scattered Immortal

My Thoughts on Scattered Immortal

Scattered Immortal is a web novel that I approached with a healthy dose of curiosity, given its "OP MC" tag and xianxia genre. After diving in, I can say it was a mixed bag, delivering some satisfying power fantasy moments but ultimately stumbling in its execution, particularly towards the end.

First Impressions

The initial chapters had me hooked with their blend of romance and cultivation. The premise of a powerful figure navigating a seemingly ordinary life was intriguing. It promised a fun ride of face-slapping and escalating conflicts, which, for a while, it delivered. However, the early lightheartedness quickly shifts gears into a more serious tone.

What Works Well

The core strength of Scattered Immortal lies in its power fantasy fulfillment. The protagonist’s journey to reclaim his strength and right past wrongs is undeniably engaging. I found myself enjoying the meticulously plotted arcs, especially in the middle section of the novel. The action sequences are well-written, and the MC's restraint in not simply beating up everyone who looks at him funny was a refreshing change of pace. The world-building, while not the most intricate, serves its purpose of providing a stage for the MC's growth and adventures.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, Scattered Immortal falters significantly in its conclusion. The ending feels incredibly rushed, as if the author suddenly lost interest or had to meet a strict deadline. Several plot threads are left unresolved, and the climax lacks the impact it should have had. This abrupt ending left me feeling disappointed and unsatisfied. Additionally, the harem aspect feels tacked on and underdeveloped, lacking genuine emotional depth. The romance, initially promising, fades into the background as the story progresses. Some may also find the "carefree" persona of the MC to be a bit forced, especially when juxtaposed with his immense power and experience.

Final Verdict

Scattered Immortal is a decent read if you're looking for a quick and easy power fantasy. The action and cultivation aspects are enjoyable, and the MC's journey is initially compelling. However, the rushed ending and underdeveloped romance ultimately hold it back from reaching its full potential. I'd recommend approaching this novel with tempered expectations and being prepared for a somewhat anticlimactic conclusion. I'd give it a 3 out of 5 stars.