Ancient One Novel Review

My Thoughts on Ancient One

"Ancient One" is a completed xianxia web novel that I decided to dive into, knowing it's a mixed bag. With a blend of comedy, harem elements, and the shounen spirit, it seemed like a potentially fun ride, even with the warnings about an arrogant protagonist. Here's what I found.

First Impressions

The initial chapters definitely throw you into the deep end with a protagonist who isn't afraid to flaunt his past life's knowledge and power. Some found this immediately off-putting, labeling it as blatant wish fulfillment. Others, however, found the brazenness refreshing and genuinely funny. I can see both sides. It's a bold move, and whether it works for you will likely determine if you stick around.

What Works Well

When "Ancient One" hits its stride, it seems to offer a decent power fantasy with some engaging elements. Several readers mentioned that the story improves significantly after the first couple hundred chapters. They praised the characters, noting they aren't just throwaway stepping stones, and that some rivals actually manage to stay relevant. I also saw positive comments about the "mind games" and scheming, which is apparently a welcome change from the usual straightforward flexing in many cultivation novels. Also, the comedy is said to improve after the initial chapters.

Areas of Concern

The biggest sticking point, and what ultimately tempers my enthusiasm, is the protagonist's arrogance. While some enjoy it as part of the power fantasy, others found it grating and poorly executed. It seems the MC often comes across as an insufferable know-it-all, and the reactions of those around him can feel forced and unbelievable. Some also felt that the writing quality diminishes later in the story, with female characters becoming less interesting and the MC devolving into a "h**ny dog". Finally, the plot itself is rather generic.

Final Verdict

"Ancient One" is a flawed but potentially enjoyable web novel. If you're looking for a story with an overpowered protagonist, don't mind some questionable humor, and can tolerate a healthy dose of arrogance, you might find something to like here. However, be prepared for a potentially bumpy ride with repetitive plot elements and characters who may not always behave in believable ways. I'd recommend going in with tempered expectations and a willingness to drop it if it doesn't click. I'm giving it a tentative 3/5.