Never See Each Other Again

My Thoughts on Never See Each Other Again

First Impressions

Okay, so "Never See Each Other Again" is... brief. Like, blink-and-you'll-miss-it brief. It's essentially a goodbye letter, a final adieu penned by someone reeling from betrayal. Going in, I knew it was a one-shot, but I wasn't quite prepared for just how concise it would be. It's more of a snapshot of raw emotion than a fully developed story.

What Works Well

Despite its brevity, the writing does manage to pack a punch. The angst is palpable, and you can feel the weight of the MC's heartbreak in every line. The synopsis promised a poignant farewell, and in that respect, the story delivers. It's a raw, unfiltered expression of pain and resignation. The author manages to convey a sense of deep hurt and finality in very few words, which is a testament to their skill. I can see why some readers might find it cathartic, even offering it as a template for their own breakups. The translation also seems to be well done, preserving the emotional impact of the original text.

Areas of Concern

Honestly, the biggest issue is the length. It's so short that it struggles to leave a lasting impression. While the writing is evocative, there's simply not enough substance to truly connect with the characters or become invested in their relationship. It feels more like a prologue or a scene plucked from a larger narrative. Without that context, the emotional impact, while present, feels somewhat diluted. Also, the shounen ai tag feels a little misleading. While the relationship is implied to be between two men, it's never explicitly stated, and the ambiguity might disappoint readers looking for a more defined BL story.

Final Verdict

"Never See Each Other Again" is a fleeting glimpse into a broken heart. If you're looking for a quick dose of angst and don't mind the extreme brevity, it might be worth a read. However, if you prefer stories with more depth and character development, you might find it lacking. I'd say it's a decent effort, but ultimately, it leaves you wanting more. I'm settling on a 3/5. It has potential, but falls short due to its limited scope.