My Lover Was Stolen, And I Was Kicked Out Of The Hero’s Party, But I Awakened To The EX Skill “Fixed Damage” And Became Invincible. Now, Let’s Begin Some Revenge Novel Review
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By rokushima asa, 六志麻あさ
3 volumes
2018
Description
Chrome was a magician in the hero’s party. He fought the Demon Lord’s army alongside people like Irina, the lover who vowed to marry him in the future, and the hero, Yuno, who was his close friend. They were all close companions. However, that was only in Chrome’s mind. His lover, Irina, became intimate with the hero, Yuno, and Chrome was sacrificed to make the hero stronger. Chrome’s magic powers were snatched away and he was kicked out of the party. Demons surrounded him as he was on the verge of death and he was driven to a corner. At that moment, Chrome awakened to a “darkness” within himself. Amidst his despair, he acquired an unrivaled skill. Now with this skill, he could exact revenge.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- syosetu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
My Lover Was Stolen, And I Was Kicked Out Of The Hero’s Party, But I Awakened To The EX Skill “Fixed Damage” And Became Invincible. Now, Let’s Begin Some Revenge Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on My Lover Was Stolen, And I Was Kicked Out Of The Hero’s Party, But I Awakened To The EX Skill “Fixed Damage” And Became Invincible. Now, Let’s Begin Some Revenge
This title certainly grabs your attention, doesn't it? The premise promises a dark revenge tale, and while it delivers on some aspects, the execution leaves something to be desired. It's a web novel with potential, but one that ultimately stumbles.
First Impressions
The initial setup is compelling: betrayal, loss, and the sudden acquisition of a unique, if not overpowered, skill. The idea of fixed damage, an ability that bypasses conventional defenses, is intriguing. I was initially hooked by the promise of a protagonist meticulously dismantling those who wronged him.
What Works Well
The translation is generally well-regarded, making the story easily accessible. Some readers appreciated the straightforward approach to revenge, where the MC doesn't hesitate to punish his betrayers. There's a certain satisfaction in seeing villains get what they deserve, especially in a genre saturated with forgiving protagonists. The core concept of an anti-hero with a distinct ability also offers a refreshing change of pace from typical power fantasies.
Areas of Concern
Unfortunately, the novel struggles with several key elements. The characters are often criticized for being one-dimensional, lacking depth, and behaving illogically. The villains, in particular, are frequently described as cartoonishly evil, making their downfall less impactful. I also found the revenge scenes to be anticlimactic. The "fixed damage" skill, while unique, leads to somewhat unsatisfying confrontations.
Another recurring issue is the rushed pacing. The story jumps quickly into the revenge plot, skipping over crucial character development and world-building. This lack of context makes it difficult to connect with the protagonist's motivations or invest in the supporting cast. The author's writing style can also be inconsistent, creating a disjointed reading experience.
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Final Verdict
"My Lover Was Stolen..." presents an interesting concept, but ultimately falls short due to its shallow characters, rushed plot, and underwhelming revenge sequences. While the translation is competent and the premise is initially engaging, the execution fails to deliver a truly satisfying experience. I'd recommend approaching this novel with caution, as it may not live up to the expectations set by its provocative title.
