My Childhood Friend, Who I Promised to Marry in the Future, Came Back as a Swordsman Novel Review
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By miyama suzu, 深山鈴
519 chapters
2020
Description
A certain boy, Fate, had a close childhood friend who promised to marry him. However, due to her parents’ circumstances, she moves far away from him. Fate dreams of seeing her again, and aims to become a strong adventurer to become the man worthy of her. He joins an A-rank party, but he is tricked into signing a s*ave contract. The days are like hell, being overworked every day. Then one day… “You are truly useless and incompetent.” “Then can I have him?” What appeared was a childhood friend who became a swordsman. When he was saved by her, everything changed for the better. Furthermore, the hidden true power of Fate is revealed… This is a story of childhood friends who join hands and walk together.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
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My Thoughts on My Childhood Friend, Who I Promised to Marry in the Future, Came Back as a Swordsman
This web novel, with its undeniably lengthy title, presents an interesting premise: a childhood promise revisited with a healthy dose of fantasy and action. While it has its undeniable charms, it also stumbles in some areas that held me back from fully embracing it.
First Impressions
The initial chapters are definitely strong. I was immediately drawn in by the reunion of the main characters and the early development of their relationship. The promise of adventure and the introduction of a swordsman childhood friend certainly piqued my interest, and I was eager to see where the story would lead.
What Works Well
The dynamic between the main characters is, without a doubt, the highlight. I appreciated that the protagonist wasn't bogged down by excessive self-deprecation, a trope I often find tiresome. The female lead actively challenges any negative self-perception he might have, which is refreshing. I also enjoyed the quick establishment of their connection, avoiding the drawn-out misunderstandings that plague many similar stories. This allowed the narrative to focus on their growth and the unfolding adventure. The early romance is a plus for readers like me who enjoy seeing relationships develop organically.
Areas of Concern
However, the writing quality became a sticking point for me. Some of the dialogue felt rather generic and lacked nuance, which, at times, made it difficult to fully invest in the characters' interactions. Furthermore, the "instant OP" trope does rear its head, and while some readers might find this appealing, I personally felt it detracted from the overall narrative. The reactions of other characters to the MC's abilities also felt somewhat exaggerated and repetitive, which, over time, became a bit grating.
Final Verdict
Ultimately, "My Childhood Friend, Who I Promised to Marry in the Future, Came Back as a Swordsman" is a passable read, especially if you're looking for a lighthearted fantasy with a strong romantic element. While the writing and certain tropes might not appeal to everyone, the engaging dynamic between the leads and the relatively quick pacing make it an enjoyable way to spend some time. I'd give it a tentative recommendation, but with the caveat that you should be prepared for some of the more common pitfalls of the genre.