Miss Loop, Whose Engagement Had Been Broken Off, Decided to Give Up This Time Novel Review
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By kanon, かのん
30 chapters
2020
Description
I looped many times. My engagement broke up because I was selfish at the beginning and everyone despised me. I tried very hard to change my attitude because I felt it wasn’t good enough, but the engagement was broken anyway. And so on and so forth. No matter how many times I try, the engagement always gets broken. Isn’t fate a cruel mistress? Yes. The story of a young woman who, after being looped for the umpteenth time and having her engagement broken off, finally gives up.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- meteor novels
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
Miss Loop, Whose Engagement Had Been Broken Off, Decided to Give Up This Time Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Miss Loop, Whose Engagement Had Been Broken Off, Decided to Give Up This Time
"Miss Loop, Whose Engagement Had Been Broken Off, Decided to Give Up This Time" certainly presents an intriguing premise: a broken engagement, a time loop, and a heroine seemingly ready to throw in the towel. However, the execution left me feeling somewhat underwhelmed. While there's a certain charm to its brevity, the story ultimately feels rushed and lacking in depth.
First Impressions
Initially, I was drawn in by the potential of the time loop element. The idea of a protagonist grappling with repeated timelines and a failed engagement sparked my curiosity. However, it quickly became apparent that the story's short length hindered its ability to fully explore these concepts. The pacing felt uneven, with significant events glossed over while other, less crucial moments were given undue attention.
What Works Well
Despite its flaws, the novel isn't entirely without merit. The translation appears to be well-done, making for a smooth reading experience. The ending, while perhaps not groundbreaking, offers a bittersweet resolution that some readers might find satisfying. Additionally, the core concept of a melancholic romance with a time loop twist holds promise, even if it doesn't quite reach its full potential. The author also managed to create a decent if limited development of the protagonist and the prince, at least during his younger years.
Areas of Concern
My primary concern lies in the story's lack of development. The plot feels rushed, and the characters, aside from the protagonist and maybe the prince, lack depth and complexity. The motivations behind certain character actions, particularly those of the sister, felt unclear and somewhat arbitrary. Furthermore, the emotional impact of the story is somewhat muted. While the protagonist's depression is evident, other emotions, such as frustration or acceptance, are not as effectively conveyed. The writing style, while simple, sometimes veers into being too simplistic, resembling a shoujo manga aimed at younger teens, which may not appeal to all readers.
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Final Verdict
"Miss Loop, Whose Engagement Had Been Broken Off, Decided to Give Up This Time" is a quick and easy read that might appeal to those looking for a light and undemanding story. However, those seeking depth, complexity, and well-developed characters may find themselves disappointed. While the premise is intriguing, the execution falls short, leaving the story feeling underdeveloped and somewhat unsatisfying. I'd recommend it only if you're in the mood for a very short, bittersweet romance and are willing to overlook its flaws.