Mind Controlling My Childhood Friend, I Made Her My S*x S*ave Novel Review

My Thoughts on Mind Controlling My Childhood Friend, I Made Her My Sx Save

Alright, let's dive into "Mind Controlling My Childhood Friend, I Made Her My Sx Save." Yeah, the title alone is a lot to unpack, and honestly, the novel itself is a mixed bag. I went in with certain expectations, and well, some were met, and others... not so much.

First Impressions

My initial impression was that this would be a straightforward, albeit potentially problematic, adult fantasy story. The premise is exactly what it says on the tin: the protagonist uses mind control on his childhood friend for... unsavory purposes. I was curious to see if the author could bring anything new or interesting to the table, or if it would just be shock value for the sake of it.

What Works Well

Honestly, the main thing that seems to work for this novel is the translation quality. I found it easy to read, and the writing itself isn't terrible, at least in terms of grammar and clarity. The author does a decent job of showing the main character's thought process, which, while disturbing, is at least consistent. Some readers might find the episodic format entertaining, especially if they're just looking for something to kill time. I can see the appeal of wanting to see where the story goes just for the sake of curiosity.

Areas of Concern

Okay, here's where things get dicey. The biggest issue, and it's a significant one, is the chapter length. They're incredibly short, often feeling more like snippets than actual chapters. This makes it difficult to get invested in the story or the characters. I felt like I was constantly being pulled out of the narrative.

The lack of consequences for the MC's actions is also a major problem. The use of a "magic lighter" to erase everyone's memories feels like a lazy plot device, and it undermines any sense of tension or stakes. Several readers have also pointed out that the MC's character seems to devolve as the story progresses, becoming less and less engaging.

Final Verdict

Overall, "Mind Controlling My Childhood Friend, I Made Her My Sx Save" is a tough one to recommend. If you're looking for well-written p*rn with no real plot, this might scratch that itch. However, if you're hoping for something with substance, character development, or meaningful exploration of its themes, you'll likely be disappointed. I think it's best to approach this novel with very low expectations and a strong tolerance for questionable content.