It Seems I Was Hitting On the Most Beautiful Girl in School Without Me Noticing (LN) Novel Review
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By gozennoryokutya, 午前の緑茶
5 volumes
2021
Description
The person he consults with at his part-time job about love is actually his crush…!? Rena Saito, the most beautiful girl in school, and Minato Tanaka became friends through their hobby of reading. They were supposed to be just friends, but the distance between them gradually narrowed! One day, Minato, who is clumsy when it comes to love, goes to a senpai at his part-time job for love advice — but for some reason, her face is bright red…? “… Don’t worry about it. Keep going, Tanaka-san.” (I can’t believe you care about me so much…ugh, come on!) Not realizing that the person he’s consulting with is his crush in disguise, he tells her all about his growing feelings, making her blush! An unconscious love comedy begins!!
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- hj bunko
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Light Novel
It Seems I Was Hitting On the Most Beautiful Girl in School Without Me Noticing (LN) Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on It Seems I Was Hitting On the Most Beautiful Girl in School Without Me Noticing (LN)
This title is quite a mouthful, isn't it? I went into "It Seems I Was Hitting On the Most Beautiful Girl in School Without Me Noticing (LN)" with a healthy dose of skepticism. The premise felt a little… contrived. Could someone really be that oblivious? But, as I dove in, I found myself surprisingly entertained.
First Impressions
My initial reaction mirrored the title – a bit bewildered. The story jumps right in, and the central conceit requires a bit of suspension of disbelief. I initially felt like the plot had been rushed to get to the meat of the story.
What Works Well
Despite my initial reservations, the characters started to grow on me. There's a certain charm to Tanaka's cluelessness and Saito's hidden depths. I found myself enjoying the slice-of-life aspects of the story, the everyday interactions, and the slow burn (eventually) of their relationship. The humor was also a pleasant surprise; there were moments that genuinely made me laugh.
Areas of Concern
My biggest concern, and it's one I can't quite shake, is the pacing of the initial romance. Saito's feelings for Tanaka seemed to develop rather quickly, especially considering her supposed initial distrust of men. It felt a little forced, a bit too convenient for the plot. I wanted to see more gradual development, more subtle hints of her growing affection. I think the story would have benefited from a bit more time spent building the foundation of their relationship.
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Final Verdict
Overall, "It Seems I Was Hitting On the Most Beautiful Girl in School Without Me Noticing (LN)" is an enjoyable read. It's not perfect, and the initial pacing might throw some readers off, but the charming characters and slice-of-life elements make it worth a look. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars. It's a light, fluffy romance that's perfect for when you need a break from more serious fare.
