I’m Dating My Ex-girlfriend’s Daughter

My Thoughts on I’m Dating My Ex-girlfriend’s Daughter

"I'm Dating My Ex-girlfriend's Daughter" is certainly a title that grabs your attention, and after diving into the completed story, I can confidently say it's an experience. It's a quick read, clocking in at only 17 chapters, and while some might find the premise a little… unusual, I found myself intrigued enough to see it through.

First Impressions

Initially, I was a bit wary. The setup is definitely unconventional, and I could see how it might raise some eyebrows. However, I tried to go in with an open mind. The early chapters definitely have a melancholic feel, and I was curious to see how the relationship between the MC and the daughter would develop.

What Works Well

The story shines in its simplicity and its moments of warmth. The protagonist, an aging salaryman, finds unexpected comfort and love in a rather peculiar situation. I appreciated the author's attempt to portray a wholesome relationship, and there are definitely moments that tug at the heartstrings. I also liked the slice-of-life aspect, which offered glimpses into their daily lives and interactions. Some readers may find the story cute, and I agree that there are moments where the characters' interactions are endearing.

Areas of Concern

The main issue I encountered was the pacing. The story felt rushed, particularly towards the end. I felt like the author could have fleshed out the characters and their relationship more. The story could have benefited from more detailed worldbuilding and character development. I also felt like some scenes were glossed over, and the story would have been better if it had been longer and more detailed.

Final Verdict

Overall, "I'm Dating My Ex-girlfriend's Daughter" is a unique and somewhat flawed story. It's a quick, easy read with some sweet moments, but it suffers from pacing issues and a lack of depth. If you're looking for a short, unconventional romance with a melancholic vibe, it might be worth a try. However, if you prefer stories with more substance and detailed character development, you might find it lacking. Personally, I'd give it a solid 3 out of 5 stars. It's not a masterpiece, but it's a harmless and somewhat charming little story.