I Became the Villainess’s Brother

By shimozuki rei, 霜月零

3.9

CompletedjapaneseWeb Novel

Genres

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comedy fantasy romance shoujo

Chapters

54 chapters

Started

2016

Description

Having wandered the borders of life and death because my younger sister lost control of her magic, I remembered that this world was the otome game 「Sparkle like a Jewel」. And I, Langlease Jackberry, am the villainess’ brother. I want to evade the destiny of destruction that I remembered. I’ll watch over my cute younger sister so that she’ll become an ordinary girl instead of a villainess, and at the very least avert her death if ruin so unluckily falls. The BAD END routes for the villainess are split into three general types. 1) Destruction Route As a villainess, my sister brought about the Prince’s displeasure when incidents of her bullying the Heroine came to light. With his impropriety exposed and his peerage revoked, Father was exiled out of the country. 2) su*cide Route My sister, who had truly loved the Prince, shocked that the Prince had announced the cancellation of their engagement at the party, committed su*cide. In this route, it is only my sister that dies, and my family and I are not condemned. 3) Jewel Route The END that could be said to be the centerpiece of the game. My sister, having displeased the Prince, was sentenced to be turned to a jewel with magic. She had been turned into a jewel the same color as her eyes. She was shattered to pieces in front of everyone. With pink jewels dancing in the midst, the still of the smiling Prince and Heroine was beautiful. However, it was my sister’s life that was smashed. I will absolutely never permit that kind of future for her. Presently, perhaps owing to her young age, her personality did not resemble in the slightest that of the template domineering, ill-tempered villainess in the game. She was kind and with a deep compassion, to the point where she was loved completely by the servants. Naturally I also thought of her as someone precious. Though I want to avoid the BAD END completely, I’ll work so that I can avoid at the worst the second and third routes where my sister dies and provide a viable lifestyle even after ruin. To continue living with my sister and my family.

Publication Information

Original Publisher: ichijinsha
Original Language: japanese
Type: Web Novel

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My Thoughts on I Became the Villainess’s Brother

"I Became the Villainess’s Brother" presents a familiar setup: reincarnation into an otome game world as the brother of the villainess. While the premise has potential, my reading experience has been somewhat mixed, leaving me with a sense of unfulfilled expectations.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the protagonist's character. The idea of a reincarnated, kind-hearted, and hardworking "fatty" in a noble setting felt refreshing. The early chapters promised a story focused on the relationship between the MC and his sister, the titular villainess. However, this focus seems to waver significantly as the story progresses.

What Works Well

There's a certain charm to the characters, particularly the protagonist himself. His dedication and genuine affection for his sister make him likeable. Some readers may find the slice-of-life elements enjoyable, particularly if they appreciate a more relaxed and less plot-driven narrative. The magic system and world-building, while not groundbreaking, are competently executed and provide a solid foundation for the story.

Areas of Concern

My main issue lies with the pacing and the shifting focus of the narrative. What starts as a story about the villainess's brother quickly devolves into seemingly disconnected side plots. This can lead to a sense of disorientation, as the main plotline takes a backseat to less compelling storylines.

The characters' ages also present a minor issue. At times, their behavior feels inconsistent with their stated age, oscillating between childish antics and surprisingly mature decision-making. This can make it difficult to fully immerse oneself in the story.

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Final Verdict

"I Became the Villainess’s Brother" has moments of charm and potential, particularly in its characters and world-building. However, the uneven pacing, shifting focus, and potential for tonal inconsistencies prevent it from reaching its full potential. While some may enjoy the relaxed slice-of-life aspects, others may find the lack of a strong central plot frustrating. Overall, it's a decent read for those seeking a lighthearted and predictable fantasy story, but it falls short of being truly memorable.

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