I am the Monarch Novel Review

My Thoughts on I am the Monarch

"I am the Monarch" is a web novel that initially grabbed my attention with its premise: a soldier gets a second chance at life, armed with the knowledge of the future. The blend of action, adventure, and kingdom-building elements promised an engaging read, and for a while, it delivered.

First Impressions

The early chapters pulled me in with the classic reincarnation trope, but with a twist. It wasn’t just about knowing what was going to happen; it was about how the protagonist, Roan, would use that knowledge to forge a different path. The initial focus on military strategy and character development was definitely a strong hook.

What Works Well

I appreciated the focus on Roan's growth as a leader. He isn't perfect, and that makes him relatable. Watching him learn from his past mistakes and build a loyal following was genuinely satisfying. Many readers have praised the butterfly effect element, where Roan's actions have tangible consequences, changing the future in unpredictable ways. This kept me on my toes, as the story wasn't simply a rehash of events he already knew. Also, the battle tactics are well-done and keep the story interesting.

Areas of Concern

However, as the story progressed, I began to notice some recurring issues. The world-building felt shallow, and the supporting characters often seemed one-dimensional, existing solely to prop up Roan's achievements. Some reviewers felt that Roan's success felt too convenient, with enemies conveniently making dumb decisions to allow him to win. I also found the translation quality inconsistent, with repetitive phrases and awkward phrasing detracting from the reading experience. The author's writing style, with its excessive use of onomatopoeia, can also be immersion-breaking.

Final Verdict

"I am the Monarch" has moments of brilliance, particularly in its early stages. The premise is intriguing, and Roan's character development is initially compelling. However, the shallow world-building, one-dimensional characters, and inconsistent writing quality ultimately hold it back. While I wouldn't call it a complete disaster, it definitely doesn't live up to its full potential. I'd recommend it with reservations, suggesting readers go in with tempered expectations.