Homemade Shaved Ice of a Highschool Girl who had her Common Sense Altered

My Thoughts on Homemade Shaved Ice of a Highschool Girl who had her Common Sense Altered

Okay, let's dive into "Homemade Shaved Ice of a Highschool Girl who had her Common Sense Altered." That title alone is quite a grabber, isn't it? I went in not quite knowing what to expect, and I definitely came out with…thoughts.

First Impressions

The premise is certainly unique, bordering on bizarre. The story centers around a high school girl who undergoes a rather significant alteration of her "common sense" via hypnotism. It's a one-shot, so you know going in that it's going to be a quick and (potentially) impactful read.

What Works Well

Honestly, "what works well" is a tricky question here. The story is certainly memorable, though perhaps not for the reasons the author intended. It explores the disturbing theme of mind control and its effects on the victim. The narrative perspective, told from the point of view of the hypnotized girl, offers a glimpse into her altered reality. I will say that the author commits to the premise, no matter how uncomfortable it might be.

Areas of Concern

The core issue for me, and I suspect for many, lies in the mature themes. The story delves into uncomfortable territory, specifically involving the manipulation and exploitation of a young woman. The "common sense alteration" involves deeply disturbing acts. If you're sensitive to themes of brainwashing, hypnotism, and abuse, this is definitely not the story for you.

Final Verdict

"Homemade Shaved Ice of a Highschool Girl who had her Common Sense Altered" is a challenging and potentially disturbing read. While the premise is certainly attention-grabbing, the execution delves into dark and uncomfortable themes that may not be suitable for all readers. Proceed with extreme caution, knowing exactly what you're getting into. Personally, I found the subject matter too unsettling to recommend, but I acknowledge that it might appeal to a very niche audience.