Hero? No, I’m an Ordinary Citizen (Monster) Novel Review
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By kitanashi kita, 東西南喜多
242 chapters
2016
Description
In the summer when I was 16 years old, I was summoned to another world as a hero. After that, a psychic, an alchemist, a sage, spirit mage, Demon Lord —being summoned by many other worlds, I repeated a lot of meetings and partings. Lives I could save; lives I couldn’t save. Hatred, sadness, happiness; with many things mixed, I recklessly pushed through. And then, at the seventh parallel world summoning, I was dragged in a hero summoning. Being summoned into Rivadeil, I wish for a peaceful life as an [Ordinary Citizen]——But his wish wasn’t fulfilled at all.He was dragged into it this time around, so he was thinking of passing this one half-heartedly, but he was dragged into trouble right from the start.The truth of the hero summoning, the disease of the king; dragged into the rampant darkness of the kingdom, by the time he noticed, he was turning into a central figure.As he watched over the summoned heroes from the shadows and under the sun, he complained as he resolved the problems that he was dragged into.And so, new encounters bring forth new enemies, and the tragedy repeats.This is a story of a pitiful ‘toy’ that had its fate distorted by a god and wants to bring back what he has lost… ——But his wish wasn’t fulfilled at all. He was dragged into it this time around, so he was thinking of passing this one half-heartedly, but he was dragged into trouble right from the start. The truth of the hero summoning, the disease of the king; dragged into the rampant darkness of the kingdom, by the time he noticed, he was turning into a central figure. As he watched over the summoned heroes from the shadows and under the sun, he complained as he resolved the problems that he was dragged into. And so, new encounters bring forth new enemies, and the tragedy repeats. This is a story of a pitiful ‘toy’ that had its fate distorted by a god and wants to bring back what he has lost…
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- syosetu
- Original Language
- japanese
- Type
- Web Novel
Hero? No, I’m an Ordinary Citizen (Monster) Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Hero? No, I’m an Ordinary Citizen (Monster)
I dove into "Hero? No, I’m an Ordinary Citizen (Monster)" with a healthy dose of curiosity. The premise of a multi-isekai'd protagonist trying to live a quiet life definitely piqued my interest. But after spending some time with it, my feelings are... mixed, to say the least.
First Impressions
Initially, I was drawn in by the potential. The idea of a protagonist weary from multiple world-saving adventures, now just wanting to blend in, is a fun twist on the typical isekai formula. There were hints of political intrigue and a mysterious aura surrounding the main character that kept me reading.
What Works Well
Honestly, the strongest point might be the quality of the translation itself. Some readers have pointed out that the writing style is noticeably better than many other web novels, which definitely helped me stick around longer than I might have otherwise. Also, the initial concept of an overpowered character navigating a new world with past experiences was interesting.
Areas of Concern
Unfortunately, the execution falters quite a bit. My biggest issue, and one that seems to be echoed by many, is the main character's inconsistent behavior. He's supposed to be a seasoned veteran of multiple isekai adventures, possessing immense power and knowledge. Yet, he often acts like a naive newcomer, easily flustered and pushed around. This disconnect between his supposed experience and his actual actions is jarring and frustrating.
The "slice of life" elements also felt forced at times. While a bit of humor is always welcome, the comedic relief often felt inappropriate and detracted from the more serious aspects of the plot. I also found it difficult to connect with the supporting characters, as many seemed underdeveloped and served primarily to prop up the MC. The political maneuvering, which could have been a strong point, often felt shallow and uninspired.
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Final Verdict
Ultimately, "Hero? No, I’m an Ordinary Citizen (Monster)" falls short of its potential. While the initial premise and translation quality offer some appeal, the inconsistent characterization, forced humor, and shallow plot prevent it from being a truly satisfying read. I wanted to love this novel, but in the end, it left me feeling disappointed.
