Close Combat Mage

My Thoughts on Close Combat Mage

"Close Combat Mage" is a novel that sparked a lot of initial interest for me, given its unique premise of a mage specializing in close-quarters combat. However, diving into it was a bit of a rollercoaster, and not always in a good way.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the idea of a water mage who defies expectations by getting up close and personal with his enemies. The early chapters, focused on the MC's struggles to earn money for his mother, were genuinely compelling. There was a certain charm in watching him use his magic in unconventional ways, like in cosmetology.

What Works Well

The initial concept of a close combat mage is quite refreshing, and the author does a decent job setting up the world and the protagonist's initial motivations. I also appreciated the MC's hard-working nature and his determination to succeed, despite his young age. The unique take on magic, with the MC using water in inventive ways, held promise.

Areas of Concern

However, as the story progressed, I found myself increasingly disappointed. The "close combat" aspect seemed to fade into the background, replaced by an emphasis on wealth accumulation and cosmetic enhancements. The MC's character development felt inconsistent; he'd swing wildly between being an innocent child and a cunning schemer. The plot became increasingly convoluted and, at times, nonsensical. The introduction of harems and other elements felt forced and detracted from the initial appeal. The author's tendency to introduce numerous characters only to discard them later was also frustrating.

Final Verdict

Ultimately, "Close Combat Mage" is a novel with a promising concept that unfortunately falls short in its execution. While the initial chapters and the unique magic system offer some appeal, the inconsistent character development, convoluted plot, and questionable content make it difficult to recommend wholeheartedly. It's a story that might entertain some, but be prepared for a bumpy ride and a significant suspension of disbelief.