A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality – Immortal World Arc

My Thoughts on A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality – Immortal World Arc

Alright, let's dive into "A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality – Immortal World Arc." As a long-time fan of web novels, especially in the xianxia genre, I was eager to see where Han Li's journey would take him after ascending to the Immortal World. This sequel certainly had its moments, but it also left me with some mixed feelings.

First Impressions

Initially, I was excited to continue Han Li's adventures. The world-building in the first part was fantastic, and I was hoping for more of that here. However, the beginning was a bit rough. The story kicks off with Han Li losing his powers again, and this time, he loses his memories too! It felt like a rehash of earlier plot points, which was a bit disappointing.

What Works Well

Despite my initial reservations, the "Immortal World Arc" does have its strengths. The world itself is still a major draw. Exploring new locations, encountering diverse races and species—that's where this series shines. I also appreciated that some plot holes from the first part were addressed. When the story moves past the initial setback of Han Li losing his powers, it does pick up. I found myself enjoying the fights and the cultivation progress.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, several aspects of the novel fell flat for me. I noticed a recurring theme in my reading experience: the author seemed to rely too much on convenient plot devices and coincidences. This made the story feel forced at times, requiring a significant suspension of disbelief.

Perhaps my biggest issue was the change in Han Li's personality. He seemed to make more reckless decisions and fell for traps that the old, cautious Han Li would have easily avoided. I also found the romance to be lacking, and the female characters often felt underdeveloped. The increased focus on time laws, while interesting in concept, sometimes made the plot convoluted and led to unsatisfying power-ups.

Final Verdict

Overall, "A Record of a Mortal’s Journey to Immortality – Immortal World Arc" is a mixed bag. While the world-building and action sequences remain engaging, the repetitive plot points, changes in the protagonist's personality, and reliance on convenient plot devices ultimately detract from the experience. If you loved the first part, you might still find enjoyment here, but be prepared for a bumpy ride.