A Broken Mirror Reunited in an E-Sports Novel Review

WE DO NOT HOST ANY CHAPTERS OR DOWNLOADS FOR THIS NOVEL.

By 雪怀金封

3.9

Translate YOUR book Now

CompletedchineseWeb Novel

Genres

Browse Library →

romance shounen ai sports

Chapters

Started

2022

Description

Rong Yi is the captain and chief tactician of the top team RS, cool and calm but suffering from camera phobia, and no one has ever seen his true face. After leading his team for five years and winning the championship for three years, he is betrayed by his team and left with nowhere to go. At this point, he receives a call from his ex. His ex is a cold-hearted and popular professional gamer who recently returned from overseas, having won numerous championships. He proposes a simple condition: “Join our team and we can restore our romantic relationship to make work easier.” Rong Yi: “Okay.” But wise men do not fall in love, and competitions are more important than anything. On the first day Rong Yi leaves his old team, his former teammates celebrate his departure, while the entire internet is filled with criticism. On the second day, netizens are silenced as they witness Rong Yi as the new team captain, completely dominating the game. On the third day, the media chases after him, but a low-key senior protects him, covering his face and revealing only a small, exquisitely white chin. The internet explodes with excitement. On and on the days go. Rong Yi’s former teammates are driven to the brink of collapse, asking with red eyes: “Captain, can you still come back?” “I’m sorry,” Rong Yi replies gently. “I’m their captain now.” Everyone knows that Rong Yi is the treasure of the entire VIT team, especially for the cold and reserved senior who shields him from everything and favors him to an infuriating degree. No one knows that this team was built for Rong Yi. From the moment Xiao Yin first saw this dusty gem, he wanted to wipe away the dust and protect Rong Yi’s brilliance. For five years, he has done just that.

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

A Broken Mirror Reunited in an E-Sports Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator

My Thoughts on A Broken Mirror Reunited in an E-Sports

"A Broken Mirror Reunited in an E-Sports" promised a blend of romance, shounen ai, and the high-stakes world of e-sports. While the premise intrigued me, my experience was a bit of a mixed bag.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the "lovers reunited" trope and the potential for a doting ML. The idea of a calm, hardworking protagonist navigating the competitive gaming scene alongside a cold yet caring love interest held a lot of appeal. However, I quickly discovered that the story's execution had some significant drawbacks.

What Works Well

The core narrative, focusing on Rong Yi's journey to shine after a setback with his former team, is compelling. Many readers, including myself, appreciated the protective and understanding environment he found with his new team, VIT. The early romance between Rong Yi and Xiao Yan, with their teasing and mutual fondness, was also a highlight. I particularly enjoyed the story's lighthearted feel and the focus on a healthy relationship where both characters support each other's growth. The e-sports element, while not as deeply explored as in some other novels, provided a solid backdrop for the romance to unfold.

Areas of Concern

My biggest issue stemmed from the translation quality. While some found it acceptable, I felt that the inconsistent pronouns, mixed-up character names, and occasional MTL-like phrasing detracted significantly from my reading experience. This made it difficult to fully immerse myself in the story and connect with the characters. Additionally, the resolution of past misunderstandings felt rushed and lacked depth. I also found the handling of Rong Yi's camera phobia to be somewhat inconsistent and anticlimactic. The power imbalance between Rong Yi and Xiao Yin, with both being exceptionally talented and successful, also reduced the tension and excitement for me.

⚠️ Spoiler Warning

Click "Reveal" to show spoiler content

Final Verdict

Overall, "A Broken Mirror Reunited in an E-Sports" is a decent read if you're willing to overlook its flaws. The charming characters and sweet romance are definitely pluses, but the translation issues and underdeveloped plot points hold it back from reaching its full potential. I'd recommend it with reservations, suggesting potential readers temper their expectations and perhaps seek out a more polished translation if available.

Featured On

actioncomedymature

Description coming soon.