When I Fell For You

My Thoughts on When I Fell For You

"When I Fell For You" is a completed yuri novel that I recently dove into, and it was quite the ride. The story focuses on a slow-burn romance between two women, and while it had some charming moments, it also presented some aspects that didn't quite click for me.

First Impressions

Initially, I was drawn in by the promise of a determined protagonist and a devoted love interest. The "love interest falls in love first" trope is always a winner in my book, and the school life setting added a layer of nostalgia. The beginning was promising, setting up potential for interesting character interactions and development.

What Works Well

The core strength of this novel lies in the dynamic between the two main characters. I found myself chuckling at their awkwardness and appreciating how their personalities complemented each other. The author did a good job of creating likable characters that I wanted to root for, even when their actions were a bit frustrating. The slow burn, while sometimes testing my patience, ultimately contributed to a feeling of genuine connection between the characters as their relationship progressed. The author did a wonderful job capturing the feeling of youthful awkwardness.

Areas of Concern

However, as the story progressed, I felt some aspects started to fall flat. The pacing, while intentional, sometimes felt too slow, particularly when it came to the characters' romantic progression. I found myself wanting them to just get on with it! There were also some narrative threads that seemed to get dropped along the way, such as the subplot involving the secret admirer and the parents' issues. This made the story feel somewhat disjointed at times. The characters' indecisiveness and insecurity felt overplayed, especially considering their age, which tested my patience.

Final Verdict

Overall, "When I Fell For You" is a mixed bag. It has moments of genuine sweetness and humor, and the central relationship is undoubtedly engaging. However, the slow pacing, dropped plot threads, and drawn-out character indecisiveness ultimately held it back from reaching its full potential. If you're a fan of slow-burn yuri romances and are willing to overlook some flaws, this might be worth a read. But if you're looking for a tightly plotted story with consistent character development, you might find yourself a bit disappointed.