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Watching the Fall of Immortals
By 错哪儿了
292 chapters
2024
Description
I’m a college student, and I got lost. Everyone here calls me Young Master Ji and advises me to accept my misfortune and move on. Before I could even react, the daughter of the county magistrate—recently selected by an immortal sect—came to break off our engagement. Heh, what an interesting beginning. I started to understand this strange world and witnessed the prosperity of the immortal path and the flourishing dynasties beneath it, contrasted with starving masses and endless suffering. These so-called cultivators feast on the people’s resources, drain the spiritual veins of the land, and then ascend with a laugh. How are they any different from corrupt officials who embezzle and flee? I really didn’t intend to get involved in this turmoil at first; I just secretly did what little I could. Now, sitting atop the peaks of the mountains, gazing at the long sky and the collapse of the immortal path, Ji You feels deeply innocent.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- qidian
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
Watching the Fall of Immortals Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Watching the Fall of Immortals
"Watching the Fall of Immortals" certainly presents an interesting premise within the crowded xianxia genre. With elements of adventure, tragedy, and even a comedic undertone, it piqued my interest, and I dove in hoping for a fresh take on cultivation.
First Impressions
The initial chapters definitely threw me for a loop. The story starts by focusing on the world and some side characters, which felt a bit jarring at first. It took a while to really get a handle on the protagonist and what his motivations were. This indirect approach to introducing the MC might not be everyone's cup of tea, and I can see why some readers might find it slow to start.
What Works Well
Once the story picks up, I found myself appreciating the unique spin it puts on familiar tropes. The protagonist isn't your typical power-hungry cultivator aiming for world domination. Instead, he seems to genuinely care for the mortal realm and views the immortal sects with a healthy dose of skepticism, even disdain. This "for the people by the people" mentality is a refreshing change from the usual face-slapping and ruthless ambition that permeates many cultivation novels. The comedic elements also help to lighten the mood, preventing the darker themes from becoming too overwhelming.
Areas of Concern
However, I do have some reservations. The world-building, while promising, can sometimes feel a little convoluted. The author's decision to rename common cultivation stages with unique terms, like "Essence of the Heart" instead of "Qi Level," might add a layer of originality, but it also introduces unnecessary confusion and complexity. I also felt that the initial development of the protagonist's abilities could have been handled better. The sudden power jumps and the somewhat vague explanation of his "golden finger" left me wanting more detail and a more organic progression. While I personally didn't feel this way, some may find the MC's early naivete and perceived lack of agency frustrating.
Final Verdict
"Watching the Fall of Immortals" is a mixed bag. It has moments of brilliance, offering a unique perspective on the xianxia genre with a protagonist who genuinely cares about the well-being of mortals. However, the slow start, confusing world-building, and somewhat rushed power development might deter some readers. If you're looking for a cultivation novel that deviates from the norm and are willing to be patient with its initial shortcomings, this might be worth a try. Otherwise, it might be best to proceed with caution.
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