Waiting Upon You

My Thoughts on Waiting Upon You

"Waiting Upon You" is a web novel that dives deep into the world of BD*M with a focus on the relationship between an aloof actor and his dominant partner. It's a story that definitely left an impression, and while it wasn't perfect, I found myself drawn into its unique dynamic.

First Impressions

Initially, I was intrigued by the premise. A celebrity with a hidden masochistic side? A cunning dominant who sees through the facade? It had all the ingredients for a compelling story. I was especially curious about how the author would handle the BD*M aspects and whether it would feel authentic and respectful.

What Works Well

I appreciated the focus on character development, particularly how the dominant slowly peels back the protagonist's layers, exposing his vulnerabilities and desires. The chemistry between the two leads is undeniable, and the author does a good job of portraying the power exchange in a way that feels both tender and satisfying. Many readers praised the slow-burn romance and the gradual acceptance between the characters. I also enjoyed the showbiz setting and the glimpses into the world of acting and celebrity life. The secondary character of the manager was also well written and added another layer to the story.

Areas of Concern

While I enjoyed the novel overall, there were a few aspects that didn't quite resonate with me. The middle portion, particularly the training arc, felt a bit weaker than the beginning and end. I also felt that the lack of clearly defined boundaries in the relationship was a bit unsettling at times. While the story aims for a consensual power exchange, it sometimes veered into territory that felt more like coercion, which made me uneasy. The resolution of the major conflict toward the end also felt a bit contrived and unrealistic.

Final Verdict

Despite its flaws, "Waiting Upon You" is a worthwhile read for those interested in exploring the themes of BD*M and power dynamics within a romantic relationship. The well-developed characters, compelling storyline, and overall exploration of a different side to relationships make it an enjoyable story. It's definitely a novel that will stay with you long after you finish reading.