Though I Have the Unique Skill 『Save & Load』, I Will Be Expelled From the Hero Party No Matter How Many Times I Start Over, Rather Fight Back- I Deal With My Ill Fate and Mess up the Hero

My Thoughts on Though I Have the Unique Skill 『Save & Load』, I Will Be Expelled From the Hero Party No Matter How Many Times I Start Over, Rather Fight Back- I Deal With My Ill Fate and Mess up the Hero

This title is quite the mouthful, isn't it? But don't let the length scare you off. This short story offers a unique twist on the classic "kicked from the hero party" trope with a protagonist who refuses to stay down, armed with the power of Save & Load.

First Impressions

Initially, I found the premise intriguing. A hero party dismissal combined with time manipulation screams potential for satisfying revenge. I was curious to see how the author would handle the MC's repeated attempts to change his fate and whether he'd truly succeed in shaking things up. The initial impression was a mixed bag, a bit rough around the edges but with a core concept that held promise.

What Works Well

What I appreciated most was the MC's development. He starts off quite naive, almost childish in his pursuit of recognition and wealth, especially from the Hero. But the story quickly shifts gears, and we see him becoming more cunning and determined. His stubbornness becomes his strength as he learns to leverage his Save & Load ability to its fullest potential. I also enjoyed the revenge aspect. Seeing him mess with the Hero after being wronged was quite satisfying. The pacing, despite being a one-shot, felt relatively well-handled, allowing for decent character growth within the limited space.

Areas of Concern

The story isn't without its flaws. Some plot points felt underdeveloped, and the world-building relied on convenient "a$$pulls" to move the narrative forward. The side characters, particularly the rest of the hero party, felt like afterthoughts, barely fleshed out. The romantic subplot also felt a bit rushed, leaving me wanting more development. It felt like the author tried to cram too much into a short story, leading to some sacrifices in depth and detail.

Final Verdict

Overall, Though I Have the Unique Skill 『Save & Load』, I Will Be Expelled From the Hero Party No Matter How Many Times I Start Over, Rather Fight Back- I Deal With My Ill Fate and Mess up the Hero is a decent, albeit flawed, read. It's a short, entertaining story with a satisfying revenge plot and a protagonist who undergoes noticeable development. While the plot and world-building could use more depth, it's a fun and quick read if you're looking for a twist on the "kicked from the party" trope. I'd give it a solid 3 out of 5 stars.