Susceptible Alpha’s Bottom Line Falls Everyday Novel Review
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By 迎秋辞
111 chapters
2023
Description
Shi Yi is an omega suffering from glandular disease. He lacks pheromones, is cold and unemotional, and only cares about his career. In the end, because he was drugged and forced into estrus, he had s*x with an unfamiliar alpha. The one who marked him was none other than the rumored domineering, cold, and vicious top alpha, Lu Yunye. Under the pressure of public opinion, the two were forced to marry. Immediately afterwards, Lu Yunye directly threw out a contract: I have a White Moonlight, no contact between us, divorce in three years. Shi Yi: Okay. … Everyone was waiting to laugh at Shi Yi, when Lu Yunye choked up at a shareholder meeting: “Wife, my wife doesn’t like me at all…” Shi Yi covered the alpha’s mouth and apologized to his in-laws present: “I’m sorry, he…” “I want my wife’s pheromone,” Eyes red, Lu Yunye pounced on him before he finished speaking. “Please…” Shi Yi had no choice but to coax him: “Be patient, and I will agree to any conditions when we go back.” Alpha: Want to touch Omega: Ok Alpha: Want to kiss Omega: …fine Alpha: Want to fully mark Omega: … —————————— Lu Yunye has a White Moonlight buried deep in his heart. It is a soft and cute omega who looks like a sweet bun, with a peach-flavored pheromone that makes one go crazy. He has been looking for his White Moonlight for more than ten years. Even after agreeing to get married, he still refuses to give up. Until one day the glands of his marriage partner developed, and he was overwhelmed by the sweetness of ripe peaches. White Moonlight is actually my wife??? T/N: Omegaverse biology (estrus, susceptible periods) is a big part of the plot, and readers should be open to how it affects the MC & ML’s personality, thoughts, & behavior without jumping to conclusions.
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Publication Information
- Original Publisher
- jjwxc
- Original Language
- chinese
- Type
- Web Novel
Susceptible Alpha’s Bottom Line Falls Everyday Review & Spoilers - Novel Translator
My Thoughts on Susceptible Alpha’s Bottom Line Falls Everyday
"Susceptible Alpha’s Bottom Line Falls Everyday" is a completed web novel that I finally got around to reading, and I have mixed feelings about it. It definitely has its charms, but it also treads familiar ground in the omegaverse genre.
First Impressions
The premise is classic: a contract marriage between an alpha and an omega, childhood connections, and amnesia. If you're a fan of these tropes, you'll likely find something to enjoy here. I went in expecting a fairly predictable story, and honestly, that's pretty much what I got. However, there were moments that really shone through.
What Works Well
The core of the story is the relationship between the main characters. The male lead (ML) is possessive and jealous, while the main character (MC) initially resists his feelings due to the contractual nature of their marriage and his past trauma. The slow-burn romance is definitely a highlight, and I found myself rooting for them to overcome their internal and external obstacles. I appreciated that the ML, despite his possessiveness, ultimately prioritized the MC's freedom and happiness. There's a sweetness to their interactions that makes the story enjoyable, and seeing them rely on each other was genuinely heartwarming. I also found the idea of the ML falling for the MC without realizing he was his childhood sweetheart, and then waiting to reveal it because he wanted to be loved for who he is now, to be quite endearing.
Areas of Concern
The plot can feel a bit drawn out at times. Many of the conflicts and misunderstandings felt predictable, and the antagonists were often weak and easily defeated. I also found the characters' IQ to fluctuate at times, leading to some frustrating miscommunications. There are also some potentially triggering themes, including past abuse.
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Final Verdict
Overall, "Susceptible Alpha’s Bottom Line Falls Everyday" is a decent read if you're looking for a familiar omegaverse romance with a slow-burn relationship and some heartwarming moments. While it may not break new ground, it offers a comfortable and enjoyable experience for fans of the genre. If you're in the mood for something light-hearted and don't mind some predictable tropes, give it a try. I'd give it a solid 3.5 out of 5 stars.
