Second Marriage with the Alliance Marshal

By mí yǔ, 弥语

3.8

chineseWeb Novel

Genres

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romance sci-fi shounen ai yaoi

Chapters

105 chapters

Started

2021

Description

Xu Xinghe, a genius omega from the Department of Computer Science at Capital University, was matched by the AI mastermind to Mu Qingyun, a major general of the Alliance, the year after his graduation. A year later, just after the marriage protection period, Major General Mu unilaterally announced their divorce. Xu Xinghe learned the news of his divorce from a colleague. He hung up the phone call from Mu Qingyun during work hours with a cold look, and after work was completed, he sent a text message to his ex-husband: “Send the divorce agreement and I will sign it.” Overnight, media coverage of his divorce was overwhelming. But no one thought that only a few days later, Xu Xinghe’s name would be on the list of mastermind matched marriages again— This time, he was matched to the Alliance Marshal, Ling Changfeng, known as the “Black God of War”. This time Xu Xinghe prepared a divorce agreement in advance. On the first night of marrying into the Marshal’s Mansion, he put the divorce agreement with his signature in front of Marshal Ling. “When you want to divorce, just sign it.” The divorce agreement was burned by Marshal Ling in less than three months. And those who were waiting to see Xu Xinghe being divorced for the second time, waited and waited, only to hear news of the marshal spoiling his little spouse. ———- Ling Changfeng never received a marriage notice from the AI mastermind for decades, and thought that he would never get married in his life. “What’s so good about getting married? A waste of time,” said the marshal. Later, he met an omega who was many years younger than him and resembled a little hedgehog. Beneath the other party’s cold appearance, he discovered the messily sweet pheromones. “It’s nice to get married.” The marshal thought to himself.

Publication Information

Original Publisher: jjwxc
Original Language: chinese
Type: Web Novel

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My Thoughts on Second Marriage with the Alliance Marshal

"Second Marriage with the Alliance Marshal" is quite the rollercoaster. I went into it with high hopes, drawn in by the sci-fi setting and the promise of a sweet romance amidst an arranged marriage. While it has its moments, I found myself ultimately a bit let down by the overall execution.

First Impressions

The initial chapters were definitely the strongest. The premise is intriguing: a quick remarriage after a divorce thrusts the MC into a new life with a powerful Alliance Marshal. The early interactions between the leads were funny and engaging, and I was eager to see their relationship develop. The world-building, though a bit clunky in places, had enough unique elements to keep me invested early on.

What Works Well

The Alliance Marshal himself is a major saving grace. Many readers seem to agree that he's a genuinely good character, a "green flag" as some put it. He's portrayed as strong and protective, but also capable of genuine affection and growth. His efforts to win over the MC, despite his own shortcomings in communication, were endearing. I also appreciated the lighthearted moments and comedic relief sprinkled throughout the story, especially in the initial chapters.

Areas of Concern

Unfortunately, the novel suffers from some significant issues. The pacing becomes a major problem around the halfway point. The plot stagnates, and I found myself losing interest in the repetitive interactions and lack of significant progress. The MC's characterization is also inconsistent. While initially presented as intelligent, his decision-making often felt illogical and frustrating, especially when it came to trusting strangers over the ML. The introduction of certain plot elements, like the MC's family history, felt rushed and poorly integrated, adding unnecessary drama without contributing meaningfully to the overall narrative. Finally, the villain reveal and resolution felt anticlimactic and underdeveloped.

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Final Verdict

"Second Marriage with the Alliance Marshal" has potential, but ultimately falls short. While the ML is a definite highlight and the initial chapters are engaging, the uneven pacing, inconsistent characterization, and underdeveloped plot points detract from the overall experience. It's a decent read if you're looking for something light and fluffy, but don't expect a deeply satisfying or well-executed story. I'd give it a 3/5.

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