Last Bus of Route 13

My Thoughts on Last Bus of Route 13

"Last Bus of Route 13" promised a unique blend of horror, mystery, and the supernatural, so I hopped on board with high expectations. While the ride had some interesting stops, it ultimately left me a little disappointed at the final destination.

First Impressions

The initial premise is intriguing: a bus driver caught in a web of ghostly passengers, mysterious fires, and potentially evil forces. The story aims for a more grounded, "everyman" protagonist, which is a refreshing change from the usual fare. I appreciated the attempt to subvert typical horror tropes. Instead of predictable scares, the story focuses on building a complex, multi-layered mystery.

What Works Well

The atmosphere is undeniably captivating. The author paints a vivid picture of the protagonist's mundane life being slowly infiltrated by the uncanny. The deliberate pacing, while potentially frustrating for some, does allow for a slow burn of suspense. The story definitely avoids easy answers, keeping you guessing about who (or what) is a ghost and what their true motives are. This ambiguity is where the novel shines.

Areas of Concern

However, the protagonist's passivity became a significant hurdle for me. While the intention was to create a relatable everyman, his lack of initiative and seemingly below-average intelligence often hampered the narrative. I found myself frustrated by his tendency to blindly trust untrustworthy characters and his reluctance to investigate obvious clues. This made it difficult to become invested in his plight or root for his success. The story's reliance on misunderstandings and the protagonist's refusal to ask basic questions felt like a weak plot device, hindering the overall mystery. This lack of engagement made the mysteries feel less compelling.

Final Verdict

"Last Bus of Route 13" has potential, offering a more traditional and atmospheric horror experience. However, the protagonist's frustrating passivity and the reliance on contrived misunderstandings hold it back. If you're seeking a slow-burn mystery with a grounded feel and don't mind a protagonist who isn't the sharpest tool in the shed, this might be worth a try. Otherwise, you might find yourself wanting to get off at the next stop.